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December 22, 2023
Placed 1st: Any Theme Poetry Contest
 Sponsor: Joseph May
Syllables: 3,3,3/4,4,4,4/5,5,5,5,5


 

Themes Enamored

Meet me when Sky paints pink On mauve eve Embossing love With blue sapphires Lured by kiss of Romantic night And twilight amber In themes enamored Bedazzles your dream As horizon gleams Lapis lazuli
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January 1, 2024 at 9:08 AM
The nebulous and nostalgic nature of this composition is apparent in its diligently-created ambiance, flawless flow, and vibrant imagery. Dreams are enchanted by the beautiful usage of twilight amber and enamored themes, while the shimmering horizon produces a feeling of lapis lazuli. I found this to be undeniably riveting to read. Dear friend. Please accept my sincere apologies for my absence; hand surgery prevented me from writing for quite some time.
Baker Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 5:18 PM
Congrats on your win, my friend. Well written with lovely imagery. Have a great 2024! Bill
May Avatar
December 27, 2023 at 3:01 PM
Congrats on your win Vijay., Very nicely penned
Goldsmith Avatar
December 27, 2023 at 9:06 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful/colorful write. Love This One... Enjoy your win...............
Sharma  Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 4:41 AM
This is one of the most enchanting poems that I've read for this contest! You've absolutely conquered the syllable counts and woven such a delicate yet fascinating write, hued with elegance of magical colours... I'm I awe.. "Meet me when Sky paints pink On mauve eve" That opening truly captivated my heart and elevated me to a Dreamland.. "Embossing love With blue sapphires", "And twilight amber", "Lapis lazuli" This is honestly, a FAV for sure.. So much depth and beauty in every line.. Wowww
Ball Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 4:13 AM
Ooo! This is such a romantic invitation to meet at the gloaming of the day. Really lovely with all the colors of the sky . Beautifully done. Loved it. God Bless, JB
Kendrick Avatar
December 25, 2023 at 9:14 PM
Very colorful lines penned. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara K
Delaney Avatar
December 25, 2023 at 5:10 PM
So beautiful. Twilight colors are alluring. Just stopped by to say Merry Christmas and a Happy 2024. May the Muse be with you. SuZ
Dietrich Avatar
December 25, 2023 at 9:51 AM
Dang. I wish I had written one this pretty
DiMino Avatar
December 25, 2023 at 8:34 AM
You are indeed the Poet of Romance. Blessings my friend. Beautiful! You get a FAV!
Buehler Avatar
December 23, 2023 at 9:44 PM
So dreamy and lovely! I adore the exquisite imagery. Best of luck in the contest. :)
Pandit Avatar
December 24, 2023 at 8:03 AM
You are so kind, Evelyn. Much appreciate my friend--many thanks.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 23, 2023 at 9:42 PM
You used lovely and romantic colors especially blue sapphires…so pleasing! Blessings!
Pandit Avatar
December 24, 2023 at 8:02 AM
Thank you my friend. Much appreciate your kind feedback, Kim. Many thanks.
Nicole Avatar
December 23, 2023 at 8:07 PM
The mood is set to dreamy and romantic, 'when sky paints pink on mauve eve. ' Your thoughts are beautiful in every way, Vijay. Sometimes less is so much more, and you've certainly created a masterpiece my dear friend. My heart is smiling. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Pandit Avatar
December 24, 2023 at 8:02 AM
Mood is set to romantic--your are right, my friend. That was what I intended. Always a delight when you visit, Brandy. Much appreciate--many thanks. Hugs to you as well, as I see your smiles.
Chiri Avatar
December 23, 2023 at 1:46 PM
Oh wow this was amazing! I see I shouldn’t have entered that context lol! Well done!:)
Pandit Avatar
December 24, 2023 at 8:00 AM
Your poem is wonderful, Brenda. Glad to see you again--much appreciate--many thanks.
Canerdy Avatar
December 23, 2023 at 7:32 AM
Vijay,this is awesome! You've made it look SO easy to fulfill the guidelines! Janice
Pandit Avatar
December 24, 2023 at 7:59 AM
Thank you Janice--much appreciate, my friend.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 23, 2023 at 6:58 AM
You left me penniless with your wealth--literally--of words, Vijay. Your words can literally enrich India's economy with a simple speech to your Parliaments Sabha's, my friend. Doctor's kept their promise and releasing me from the hospital with 90% functionabilty. Ongoing home care assistance and nusring plus Physical therapy--egads! Mele Kalikimaka a Hau'oli Mak Hiki Hou 2024. Aloha, William
Pandit Avatar
December 24, 2023 at 7:58 AM
Glad you are feeling better my friend. Keep up the good work and follow the doctor's advice, William. Always a joy to read your kind feedback. Many thanks.
One Avatar
December 23, 2023 at 5:48 AM
You did this from very well Vijay, great use of words and colours to create your message.. And twilight amber In themes enamored Bedazzles your dream As horizon gleams Lapis lazuli.. I really loved that..good luck in the contest my friend..
Pandit Avatar
December 24, 2023 at 7:56 AM
Glad you liked the poem, SO. Much appreciate your kind feedback--many thanks.
Empress Avatar
December 22, 2023 at 9:57 PM
Dear Vijay, how nice to see you post and I absolutely love everything about this. The mood, flow imagery and diction, truly makes this an ethereal and soulful write. Especially the opening line “ meet me when sky paints pink” wow! I love that, how captivating! “ embossing love with blue sapphires “ i love that line too! How heartfelt. And soulful! This is truly outstanding! And magical! Romantic! A fave for me despite it being short, i think youll do the short form contest very well too. BOL
Pandit Avatar
December 24, 2023 at 7:56 AM
You are always so very kind, my friend. I am in debt of your generous comments, always. You have ceaseless goodwill in your heart--I see you spreading joy on Soup everywhere you visit. Many thanks for your FAVE, Ink.
Cunningham Avatar
December 22, 2023 at 8:33 PM
You write romance so well in any form Vijay, this is no exception. Best of luck and merry Christmas. Tom
Pandit Avatar
December 24, 2023 at 7:53 AM
So glad to hear that. Much appreciate, Tom--many thanks.
There Avatar
December 22, 2023 at 7:27 PM
Dreamy, my friend. Good to see you here. Sorry I've been away so long.
Pandit Avatar
December 24, 2023 at 7:51 AM
So glad to see you again, my friend. Much appreciate you taking the time to grace my page. Be well, Jodie.
Sands Avatar
December 22, 2023 at 4:17 PM
Absolutely beautiful my friend. Well done. Good luck in the contest. A winner for me :)
Pandit Avatar
December 24, 2023 at 7:49 AM
Thank you my friend. Your words of kind support always resonate with me.
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