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December 22, 2023
Placed 1st: Any Theme Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Joseph May
Syllables: 3,3,3/4,4,4,4/5,5,5,5,5

Meet me when Sky paints pink On mauve eve Embossing love With blue sapphires Lured by kiss of Romantic night And twilight amber In themes enamored Bedazzles your dream As horizon gleams Lapis lazuli

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Sotto Poet

Date: 1/1/2024 9:08:00 AM

The nebulous and nostalgic nature of this composition is apparent in its diligently-created ambiance, flawless flow, and vibrant imagery. Dreams are enchanted by the beautiful usage of twilight amber and enamored themes, while the shimmering horizon produces a feeling of lapis lazuli. I found this to be undeniably riveting to read. Dear friend. Please accept my sincere apologies for my absence; hand surgery prevented me from writing for quite some time.

Bill Baker

Date: 12/28/2023 5:18:00 PM

Congrats on your win, my friend. Well written with lovely imagery. Have a great 2024! Bill

Joseph May

Date: 12/27/2023 3:01:00 PM

Congrats on your win Vijay., Very nicely penned

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/27/2023 9:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful/colorful write. Love This One... Enjoy your win...............

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/26/2023 4:41:00 AM

This is one of the most enchanting poems that I've read for this contest! You've absolutely conquered the syllable counts and woven such a delicate yet fascinating write, hued with elegance of magical colours... I'm I awe.. "Meet me when Sky paints pink On mauve eve" That opening truly captivated my heart and elevated me to a Dreamland.. "Embossing love With blue sapphires", "And twilight amber", "Lapis lazuli" This is honestly, a FAV for sure.. So much depth and beauty in every line.. Wowww

Judy Ball

Date: 12/26/2023 4:13:00 AM

Ooo! This is such a romantic invitation to meet at the gloaming of the day. Really lovely with all the colors of the sky . Beautifully done. Loved it. God Bless, JB

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/25/2023 9:14:00 PM

Very colorful lines penned. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara K

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 12/25/2023 5:10:00 PM

So beautiful. Twilight colors are alluring. Just stopped by to say Merry Christmas and a Happy 2024. May the Muse be with you. SuZ

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/25/2023 9:51:00 AM

Dang. I wish I had written one this pretty

Joe Dimino

Date: 12/25/2023 8:34:00 AM

You are indeed the Poet of Romance. Blessings my friend. Beautiful! You get a FAV!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 12/23/2023 9:44:00 PM

So dreamy and lovely! I adore the exquisite imagery. Best of luck in the contest. :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/24/2023 8:03:00 AM

You are so kind, Evelyn. Much appreciate my friend--many thanks.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/23/2023 9:42:00 PM

You used lovely and romantic colors especially blue sapphires…so pleasing! Blessings!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/24/2023 8:02:00 AM

Thank you my friend. Much appreciate your kind feedback, Kim. Many thanks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 12/23/2023 8:07:00 PM

The mood is set to dreamy and romantic, 'when sky paints pink on mauve eve. ' Your thoughts are beautiful in every way, Vijay. Sometimes less is so much more, and you've certainly created a masterpiece my dear friend. My heart is smiling. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/24/2023 8:02:00 AM

Mood is set to romantic--your are right, my friend. That was what I intended. Always a delight when you visit, Brandy. Much appreciate--many thanks. Hugs to you as well, as I see your smiles.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 12/23/2023 1:46:00 PM

Oh wow this was amazing! I see I shouldn’t have entered that context lol! Well done!:)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/24/2023 8:00:00 AM

Your poem is wonderful, Brenda. Glad to see you again--much appreciate--many thanks.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/23/2023 7:32:00 AM

Vijay,this is awesome! You've made it look SO easy to fulfill the guidelines! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/24/2023 7:59:00 AM

Thank you Janice--much appreciate, my friend.

Hilo Poet

Date: 12/23/2023 6:58:00 AM

You left me penniless with your wealth--literally--of words, Vijay. Your words can literally enrich India's economy with a simple speech to your Parliaments Sabha's, my friend. Doctor's kept their promise and releasing me from the hospital with 90% functionabilty. Ongoing home care assistance and nusring plus Physical therapy--egads! Mele Kalikimaka a Hau'oli Mak Hiki Hou 2024. Aloha, William

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/24/2023 7:58:00 AM

Glad you are feeling better my friend. Keep up the good work and follow the doctor's advice, William. Always a joy to read your kind feedback. Many thanks.

Silent One

Date: 12/23/2023 5:48:00 AM

You did this from very well Vijay, great use of words and colours to create your message.. And twilight amber In themes enamored Bedazzles your dream As horizon gleams Lapis lazuli.. I really loved that..good luck in the contest my friend..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/24/2023 7:56:00 AM

Glad you liked the poem, SO. Much appreciate your kind feedback--many thanks.

Ink Empress

Date: 12/22/2023 9:57:00 PM

Dear Vijay, how nice to see you post and I absolutely love everything about this. The mood, flow imagery and diction, truly makes this an ethereal and soulful write. Especially the opening line “ meet me when sky paints pink” wow! I love that, how captivating! “ embossing love with blue sapphires “ i love that line too! How heartfelt. And soulful! This is truly outstanding! And magical! Romantic! A fave for me despite it being short, i think youll do the short form contest very well too. BOL

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/24/2023 7:56:00 AM

You are always so very kind, my friend. I am in debt of your generous comments, always. You have ceaseless goodwill in your heart--I see you spreading joy on Soup everywhere you visit. Many thanks for your FAVE, Ink.