Theme of Birds

On the theme of birds that flutter and fly
I’d free my flock of dreams to swarm the sky
Blind to both cage and fetter
-blinded by sun and freedom of feather
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Guzzi Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 5:23 PM
Hmmmm reminded me of that caged feeling. I wrote something called Precious Fair..you might like. Might you kindly give me a blog comment? Light & Love
Dietrich Avatar
September 13, 2010 at 10:41 PM
Samir, this rocks!! If only I were as good in my major of Spanish as you are in your English. I think it's time to add you to my fav poets list! Luv, Andrea
Chu Avatar
September 12, 2010 at 1:28 PM
Sounding good. Are you doing the 29 word form? "I’d free my flock of dreams to swarm the sky" '-blinded by sun and freedom of feather" those are great lines.
A   Avatar
September 12, 2010 at 1:26 PM
lovely write, and is this for the contest? well if so good luck, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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