Them Carbs

Have some more scones with jam and cream,
And a mound of spuds for tea,
Then you'll find your obesity,
With them carbs will be your mortality,
It is your responsibility,
To limit your own gluttony,
There are, indeed, bad calories,
Carboholics eat too much, you see!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Allison Avatar
August 7, 2019 at 3:13 AM
lol what a giggle and i love the pun to start with Julie, got to admit I love the scones not much of a spuds or bread fan and don't have a weight problem:-) hugs Jan xx
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August 5, 2019 at 9:19 PM
Lol! And truth. I've gone low carb with dramatic results.
Allison Avatar
August 7, 2019 at 3:14 AM
well done Mo!!:-) hugs Jan xx
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