Joanna Daniel Poet Monorhyme

Their Wedding File

His wait for a while can be difficile,
but he's gone docile seeing her profile, 
walking down the aisle with her charming smile,
she's here to beguile him in her grand style,
more compliments pile on their wedding file -
their dream domicile makes it all worthwhile.


January 9th, 2017.

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Jean Murray January 17, 2017 at 5:10 PM Sounds like they will live happy ever after Jo. Lovely flow to this. Congratulations.

Agnes Krampe January 16, 2017 at 5:41 PM Very creative monorhyme, Jo. Congrats on your placement.

Sandra Haight January 16, 2017 at 4:17 PM Lovely sentiments in your well-written Monorhyme, Jo. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Darren White January 15, 2017 at 10:03 AM Congratulations on your placement, Jo :)

Mark Martin January 12, 2017 at 3:41 PM Congrats on your win Jo! Like it! :-)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 11, 2017 at 2:46 AM lovely sweet poem Jo.. :) Yes, Im trying my pen again.. :D! //OLive ELoisa :)

Sandra Haight January 10, 2017 at 7:08 PM A very sweet poem with good internal/ending Monorhymes, Jo! Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Paul Callus January 10, 2017 at 3:28 PM An excellent monorhyme which projects such a lovely romantic image, Jo. A day worth waiting for!! Congratulations on a delightful win. // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen January 10, 2017 at 12:17 PM - A beautiful poem, Jo - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis January 10, 2017 at 5:59 AM Marvelously written Monorhyme my friend, Jo! Much enjoyed! A seven!

Afzal Nusker January 9, 2017 at 10:49 PM Lovely. Congratulations!

Robert Lindley January 9, 2017 at 10:35 AM Very well composed Monorhyme, my friend. Good luck in that contest!A7

Chris Green January 9, 2017 at 9:32 AM Beautifully written Jo. This one reads so nicely, almost song like. Good luck in the contest.