Their Reflection In My Eyes

For all the stars that shined their light
And found their reflection in my eyes
Not one could illuminate this cavernous sky
For their vision was constrained by sight

You peer into the depths of my galaxies
Without a word my heart falls to knee
So loving, piercing, so all consuming
Are your eyes when beholding me

Your touch like brilliant colors tracing the sky
You wrap me in your light while my old skin takes flight
Peculiar the way without you for hours or a day
My body feels naked my world in dismay 

A word with more power than loves been explained 
Is thee expression I seek yet fail to attain
It resides in the sound I hear in your voice
Or how it feels on my lips to say your name

No lyric or poem nor work of art
No celestial body that lingers on high
No beauty that lies where ocean waters hide
Describe how you search me with your eyes

You exhume a surrender I once buried so deep
From that first time my heart skinned its knee
Which taught me give only your soul to this point
Relinquish not your own needs... Quickly wish them Godspeed 

Yet you say without words in those sapphire pools
That you'll honor the treasure of my trust
My surrender is your prize the apple of your eye
Your bride and the love of your life 

Our dreams and our needs no longer be carried alone
For infinities love ever winds
My joy is your smile your crown is my throne
Your happiness is mine intertwined

Yes so many stars have shined their light
And found their reflection in my eyes
But only yours has shined so bright
it begs a loving surrender... known as a wife

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 11/19/2013 2:30:00 PM
amazing beautifully drawn piece
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Date: 11/18/2013 4:04:00 PM
Fantastic & delightful to the Nth degree! An incredible ending that awakens the smiles within. Tell it like it is...love it!
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Sarai Virden
Date: 11/19/2013 9:53:00 AM
Many thanks Sir Drake... Hugs for your day
Date: 11/18/2013 11:00:00 AM
DOUBLE and TRIPLE WOW!!! Sarai, you touch my heart with your love poems! You write so beautifully! Your good good friend sending you kudos as well as warm cuddly hugs!
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Sarai Virden
Date: 11/18/2013 12:52:00 PM
You make my day Sweet friend of mine... You know your an amazing mentor. Warm cuddly hugs to you always xoxoxox
Date: 11/18/2013 10:07:00 AM
SIMPLY WOW!!!!!
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Sarai Virden
Date: 11/18/2013 12:47:00 PM
Sarai's delight
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