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Their Own Consequence

I see people who hurt with words and lie Hide their true selves and never really care They are avoided, for they will not try To change their ways, be genuine or care I have seen people commit crimes easily Hide their true selves and never really care These same people live their lives secretly One day, they will face their own consequence I have seen people commit crimes easily They rely on people with prominence To carry on with their bad, reckless, ways One day, they will face their own consequence They must be parted from, to save the days Sadly, their choices hurt others always To carry on with their bad reckless ways It takes strength to endure the hurt that stays I see people who hurt with words and lie Sadly, their choices hurt others always They are avoided, for they will not try Heidi Sands 8/10/17

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Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 8/11/2017 9:16:00 AM

Nice write, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/11/2017 9:22:00 AM

Thank you Dale :)

Joseph May

Date: 8/10/2017 5:45:00 PM

Very true Heidi...Very well expressed..

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/10/2017 5:49:00 PM

Thank you Joseph. I appreciate your comment on this :)

Eve Roper

Date: 8/10/2017 5:20:00 PM

Powerful write with good advice, Heidi. I am so tired and upset, especially for those that say they are christians, but it easy for them to think that it is alright for them to spread and write malicious comments. Bravo for you to say something , keep it up ... Hugs

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/10/2017 5:49:00 PM

Thank you Eve. I appreciate your kind comment on this one :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/10/2017 4:44:00 PM

This is such a well written Terzanelle, you are getting quite good at these my friend! Many more and you will be a master of the Terzanelle! What a beautifully crafted and grandiose poem! Great Work!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/10/2017 4:47:00 PM

Thank you Russell. Not sure about a master..lol...but I do now enjoy these. I appreciate your feedback and support always. :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/10/2017 4:40:00 PM

So true. Moves well--well written--good work Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/10/2017 4:46:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind support Vijay. I appreciate it. Hope your day is going well :)