Their Meeting

Meeting of two souls Absorbed they be totally Sharing past, present Where will they be tomorrow Let time roll, let it be, they .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kiser Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 2:14 PM
A beautiful tanka of two souls.
Fraser Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 2:22 PM
Yea, I kinda like this one M.L. - glad you liked it, James :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 8:27 AM
let the time roll............................... :)! thoughtfully written and driven write??? :)!
Fraser Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 1:25 PM
Thank you Olive, indeed, 'let the time roll' so I can reach my goal. Blessed day to you and yours, James :) x
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 4:24 PM
a meeting of two souls what a wonderful event when everything is simply meant to be and your find that 'perfect' one- great write and I love the 'let it be' link:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Fraser Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 1:03 PM
Hiya Jan, yes 'the let it be' nice addition thanks to someone. Need to catch up on some commenting this evening. Many hugs for you, James xx
Chircop Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 3:54 PM
Tomorrow..Where will they be.. Will they be strangers or a family?So much to ponder in your tanka dear friend!Powerful and deep.
Fraser Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 12:54 PM
I so love the wonders of words and what they can paint, say, deliver. I love your visits to my poems Charmaine, James :) xx
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