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Their Meeting

Meeting of two souls Absorbed they be totally Sharing past, present Where will they be tomorrow Let time roll, let it be, they .

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Date: 12/18/2014 2:14:00 PM
A beautiful tanka of two souls.
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James Fraser
Date: 12/18/2014 2:22:00 PM
Yea, I kinda like this one M.L. - glad you liked it, James :)
Date: 12/18/2014 8:27:00 AM
let the time roll............................... :)! thoughtfully written and driven write??? :)!
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James Fraser
Date: 12/18/2014 1:25:00 PM
Thank you Olive, indeed, 'let the time roll' so I can reach my goal. Blessed day to you and yours, James :) x
Date: 12/17/2014 4:24:00 PM
a meeting of two souls what a wonderful event when everything is simply meant to be and your find that 'perfect' one- great write and I love the 'let it be' link:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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James Fraser
Date: 12/18/2014 1:03:00 PM
Hiya Jan, yes 'the let it be' nice addition thanks to someone. Need to catch up on some commenting this evening. Many hugs for you, James xx
Date: 12/17/2014 3:54:00 PM
Tomorrow..Where will they be.. Will they be strangers or a family?So much to ponder in your tanka dear friend!Powerful and deep.
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James Fraser
Date: 12/18/2014 12:54:00 PM
I so love the wonders of words and what they can paint, say, deliver. I love your visits to my poems Charmaine, James :) xx

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