Their First

Her hands were so soft As they found their way under his shirt Finding that sensitive lower part of his back She pulled him closer to her Allowing him to become familiar with her scent Like springtime flowers in her hair, on her skin He could actually taste the jasmine that lingered there Continuing to be nervous, his hands slowly embraced her Finding the curves that she beautifully adorns with style He holds her, telling her through touch, of his feelings Of the night, the two will then share

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Date: 3/9/2009 11:20:00 PM
Oh My,...I need to cool off!!..So many romantic private feelings flowing so freely here..You painted a gentle soft portrait colored with intimacy and passion for the reader to see- Gorgeous write..Nicely done, GB Tyesha
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Date: 3/9/2009 12:06:00 PM
Beautiful Michael as usual. You express love, romance and passion so well in your writing. Thank you for sharing. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/9/2009 6:58:00 AM
Very sensual poem Michael - I reckon that would be love - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 3/9/2009 5:52:00 AM
Yikes. Whew this is hot stuff but so gently and tenderly expressed. Extremely beautiful. Love, Shar
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