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Their Chosen Disease

I watch a sunset 
that I'd love to share 
and nobody sees it but me 
   
I'm scratching my head 
in utter amazement 
that nobody cares much to see 
   
Things to accomplish 
things to get done 
a million things every day 
   
And all of these things 
have one thing in common 
they manage to get in the way 
   
"In the way of what?" 
as you may well ask 
"I'm doing my best to get by." 
   
And oh, what a shame 
so sad and so true 
we squander our lives 'til we die 
   
And doing their best 
devoid of expression 
their faces are empty and bleak 
   
So busy, so dizzy 
en masse, repetition 
robotically, chronically weak 
   
And what are they doing? 
Yes, why such devotion 
to this seemingly endless malaise? 
   
They're taking a rain check 
and storing up treasures 
and longing for much brighter days 
   
No time for a sunset 
no walks in the park 
no place for a soft ocean breeze 
   
They march on in madness 
a dutiful army 
en route to their chosen disease

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/19/2019 6:51:00 PM
Yes, you're right! They don't know what they're missing. Well expressed.
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Michael Wise
Date: 1/20/2019 6:34:00 AM
We really don't know what we're missing, do we? Thank u Sunlite. :)
Date: 1/19/2019 6:25:00 PM
Agreed...and so many lost in their cell phone worlds, as well! Wait...I’m on a cellphone writing this right now, lol! Good write, Michael :)
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Michael Wise
Date: 1/20/2019 6:35:00 AM
AHA! See? LOL. Thanks Laura! :)
Date: 1/19/2019 1:22:00 PM
Very well said Michael! So true. :)
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Michael Wise
Date: 1/20/2019 6:35:00 AM
Many thanks to you, Heidi! :)

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