Theatre Temporarily Closed

Santa and Frosty went to the playhouse
A Disney movie with candy, popcorn
A small squeaky between the sits, a mouse
Theater closed, they stood outside forlorn


12/22/2020


Christmas Chastushka - Rules Revised Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Callus Avatar
December 29, 2020 at 12:24 PM
Back with congratulations, Eve. I heard the theatre will open again on 1st Jan :) Taking this opportunity to wish you a peaceful and healthy new year, my friend. Hugs // paul
Allison Avatar
December 27, 2020 at 4:25 PM
am sure it would have been a different scene if it had been Mickey mouse, its such a shame covid has closed so many venues :-( wishing you a speedy recovery and good wishes for 2021:-) hugs Jan xx
Edmonds  Avatar
December 27, 2020 at 12:36 PM
Trust a mouse to close the playhouse, an amusing write Eve, a well deserved win... Belle
Hinshaw Avatar
December 27, 2020 at 11:48 AM
Congrats, Eve, for your well-deserved win in the contest - a delightful write! Many thanks for your kind comment re my win and a Happy, Healthy New Year! Bob H
Kerr Avatar
December 27, 2020 at 11:18 AM
Hello Eve, Such a charming entry laced with humour. Congratulations on winning placement. Thanks for your soupmail regarding my submission. Warmth and hugs howard
Goldsmith Avatar
December 26, 2020 at 11:17 AM
Congratulations on your win. "So Cute" It had to be the big mouse himself. (Mickey Mouse) Enjoy your win with blessings.................
Kendrick Avatar
December 25, 2020 at 3:04 PM
Just stopped by to say congrats on your winning work and thanks for dropping by my page. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
December 24, 2020 at 6:00 PM
I just saw Paul's comment. I was almost thinking that too!!
Dietrich Avatar
December 24, 2020 at 5:59 PM
oh so sad and forlorn, to think of this closed theater! Thanks for your participation, Eve. It was a lot of fun reading all my winners. Congrats and a merry Christmas to you, Dear.
Wolf Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 5:19 PM
I can't imagine closing down the theater b/c Mickey Mouse chose to attend! lol. Cute one, Eve. :) gw
Callus Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 2:50 PM
Probably, it was Mickey Mouse since they went to see a Disney movie:) He certainly had the last laugh! ~ Wishing you the very best for Christmas, Eve. Hugs // paul
Kendrick Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 2:03 PM
Ahhh!! Sad one.. Most of the theaters are still closed here in our area but not because of a mouse. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara
Buhagiar Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 6:37 AM
That was quite a laugh to close the theatre for just a mouse :) ~~
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