Eileen Manassian Poet Rhyme

The Zenith

My sweet precious man
My darling boy
You think you feel the heat
Oh, but little do you know
The zenith is yet to come

You are warming nicely
Fingers of fire under your skin
A healthy pink glow
As you take the heat in
The zenith is yet to come

You are searing nicely
I watch you begin to sweat
From every pore everywhere
Getting a nice salty wet
The zenith is yet to come

Everything else fades
Your mind and body burn
In my blaze about to faint
And yet you still yearn
The zenith is....almost...here

Sizzling flesh, scorching flares
Devoured by each ray
You beg for release
Tired of Sunshine play
THE ZENITH HAS...C...O...M...E

Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Richard Lamoureux November 30, 2013 at 11:34 AM All is well, thanks for asking.

Richard Lamoureux November 29, 2013 at 9:13 AM Good morning Eileen. Missed you yesterday. Eileen Manassian November 29, 2013 at 1:12 PM I'm back! :) Hope all is well with you, Richard. Thanks for the visits....

Demetrios Trifiatis November 28, 2013 at 11:26 AM Anticipation, realization, reward! I wonder if the good man will be able to withstand the titanic forces that these three emotional storms bring! If he does, then blessed would he be! Wonderfuly written! Lucky man! Eileen Manassian November 29, 2013 at 1:14 PM Wonderful, wonderful post, my dear poet. Yes....I am a force of nature. That much is true. :) You are always so kind with your comments. You give me confidence. Sweet of you! Filakia....

Richard Lamoureux November 28, 2013 at 8:46 AM Good morning, I had a nice sleep in our own bed. Nice to travel but also nice to be home. Eileen Manassian November 29, 2013 at 1:15 PM No place like home, Richard......Not even all the lights of Vegas can outshine the beauty of a place where you are loved and cared for. Glad you had a good time.

Charlotte Puddifoot November 28, 2013 at 6:38 AM now this would've been very apt for my contest, it's definitely a scorcher! I particularly like the line "fingers of fire under your skin"...thanks for stopping by and commenting on mine :) Eileen Manassian November 29, 2013 at 1:16 PM OH DEAR OH DEAR....I did enter something for your contest, Charlotte. Too late to swap? ;) Thanks for this lovely visit. I thoroughly enjoyed your scorching poem, my dear! If I were the sponsor.....I know who would win....Waiting to see if my prediction comes true! ;)

Richard Lamoureux November 27, 2013 at 11:08 PM Hi Eileen, just got home. It was a fun and emotional trip. Nice to be home. I do like special activities under the sun. Very sexy Eileen. Eileen Manassian November 29, 2013 at 1:18 PM Yes, Richard.....activities under the dazzling brilliance of the sun are incomparable! Glad you liked this write.....Sexy...well, I tried to make it that. I'm enthralled by the word zenith! The height...the apex....the climax...the peak...Wonderful word. Somehow it came up in class, and well..the rest...as they say...is history! ;)

Joseph Sergi November 27, 2013 at 5:00 PM Eileen Hot,Hot,Hot very moving nice one! Eileen Manassian November 29, 2013 at 1:19 PM NEED SOME WATER????? ;) Thanks for the visit!

Nette Onclaud November 27, 2013 at 4:11 PM anticipation is infectious... lovely, sizzling write, eileen!... enjoyed this prelude !..huggs Eileen Manassian November 29, 2013 at 1:20 PM How sweet, Nette. Thanks ever so much! :) Sizzling.....I tried to make it sizzle as much as possible....I do love getting a good tan! ;) I'm a sun worshiper....Nothing like sun and beach to make me happy........Well....there are some things a whole lot better! ;)

Honestly J.T. November 27, 2013 at 1:16 PM Nice one. this is another one of those poems that could leave the reader speechless. It has sexy written all over it. Eileen Manassian November 29, 2013 at 1:21 PM :) Justice....this is a very sweet and lovely comment by you! Thanks... :) I so enjoy your visits. Hugs

Poet Tacito November 27, 2013 at 12:11 PM Yummy yum yum. "Tired of sunshine play"...mmhm, time to make it rain. Yay for the weather! Eileen Manassian November 29, 2013 at 1:22 PM Yes.........YAY for the weather! You are funny! ;) I have written one on the rain...Indeed I have.....I AM THE RAIN.....HA HA HA HA..catchy title? Give it a read.....if you have time! Hugs

Jon A Cavanaugh November 27, 2013 at 11:39 AM Oh my, another fiery write. You are on a roll and smoking hot Eileen. Eileen Manassian November 29, 2013 at 1:12 PM Fiery indeed! Yes....I like that! :) Thanks for stopping by, Jon.....