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The Zen of Water and Sky

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And in meditation I drift to where the water and sky meet, on rolling waves bright blue and swift. Oh, heavenly retreat, here, I want to stay, and sun falling- delay. Floating where water and sky entwine, and there is no dividing line. ___________________ January 4, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/The Zen Of Water and Sky Copyright Protected, ID 18-9801-02-01 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Submitted into Standard Contest #65 sponsor, Brian Strand Second Place

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Date: 1/30/2018 12:47:00 PM
Congratulations for your win :)
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Date: 1/29/2018 6:23:00 PM
Love the imagery and feeling in your poem, Constance. Congratulations on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/29/2018 2:09:00 PM
Congrats on your win, BW. This little bite of perfection is a new FAVE with me. Thank you.
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Date: 1/29/2018 7:57:00 AM
Ah, that spot where heaven cools the wilting sun.....beautifully written ....
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Date: 1/28/2018 9:06:00 PM
Evokes a wonderful feeling! It’s where I want to be too...where water and sky meet! Congrats!
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Date: 1/6/2018 1:14:00 AM
If you don't mind my forwardness, may I join you?
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Date: 1/4/2018 8:14:00 PM
Very pretty! All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 1/4/2018 5:04:00 PM
A beautiful poem..lovely rhymes..floating in joy.
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