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The Zen of Water and Sky

And in meditation I drift
   to where the water and sky meet,
on rolling waves bright blue and swift.
   Oh, heavenly retreat,
            here, I want to stay,
            and sun falling-  delay.
Floating where water and sky entwine,
and there is no dividing line.

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January 4, 2018

Poetry/Rhyme/The Zen Of Water and Sky
Copyright Protected, ID 18-9801-02-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written Under Pseudonym.

Submitted into Standard Contest #65
sponsor, Brian Strand

Second Place
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Sands Avatar
January 30, 2018 at 12:47 PM
Congratulations for your win :)
Haight Avatar
January 29, 2018 at 6:23 PM
Love the imagery and feeling in your poem, Constance. Congratulations on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
January 29, 2018 at 2:09 PM
Congrats on your win, BW. This little bite of perfection is a new FAVE with me. Thank you.
Lawless Avatar
January 29, 2018 at 7:57 AM
Ah, that spot where heaven cools the wilting sun.....beautifully written ....
Rodrigues Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 9:06 PM
Evokes a wonderful feeling! It’s where I want to be too...where water and sky meet! Congrats!
Inman Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 1:14 AM
If you don't mind my forwardness, may I join you?
Godwin Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 8:14 PM
Very pretty! All the best ... CayCay
Pandit Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 5:04 PM
A beautiful poem..lovely rhymes..floating in joy.
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