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The Young Fisherman

His long cane pole limber and perfect, Patiently waiting, his eye on the bobber For his prey, he has the utmost respect, The big fish almost becoming his cobber. He’d seen it swim among the rocks alone Unmindful of its nemesis on the bank The water clearer, he could see the stone, He longed to hook it firmly, give it a yank. Four times before he’d watched it feed Once in the rocks, thrice in the shallows A great catch it would surely fulfill a need To cement his place among his fellows, But the sun now approaching mid-morn Signaled he was too late to catch today, Beaming on the fisherman with scorn No prize catch would there be to filet.
Written August 15, 2022

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Date: 8/16/2022 11:48:00 PM
Oh, yes, I have seen the ultimate fish many times and not caught it! Mid morning is too late for sure!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/17/2022 8:13:00 AM
But, he'll try again! He always does. And, eventually, he will bring home the prize.
Date: 8/16/2022 6:40:00 AM
Reminded me when I went fishing once on the pier, didn't get one bite, but it was so relaxing. Tom
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/16/2022 8:24:00 AM
You got all the benefit then, Tom. I never went fishing without being hopeful, but most of the time all I ever caught was bluegills, which are pretty easy to catch in a farm pond. I went deep sea fishing once when I was mentoring, but we didn't catch anything either. I have caught a few bass, occasionally.
Date: 8/15/2022 7:15:00 PM
lol the fisherman will need a fried egg today!! I loved this bucolic poetry and you conveyed with lightness and security a scene that we can imagine when reading every word.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/15/2022 7:26:00 PM
Aw, thanks, Marco. I really appreciate your positive analysis and your thoughtful all wrapped up in this very nice comment. Good to see you!

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