The You of My Past

I’ve left all of my thoughts 
On your drowsy, cozy bed.
All those dreams that we’d
Put together then.
All those floating feathers
And your thrilled laughter
Still there lay. 
There, on that bed,
I’ve forgotten all my smiles
And all that bliss
That you covered me with.
On your pillow I’d rest
My tears again
So you’d evenly pick them 
Up with the tip
Of your lips.
I still remember you
As you were…
As now, you are not!

We will sometime 
Return to our darling bed,
To expel this awful past…


© 2009 Stefania Carmen Misaila

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 6/21/2009 6:08:00 PM
This wonderful way of expression presented, within the simple yet profound; takes the reader unto "Your Soul," wherefrom beauty utterly flows, "Beautiful Stephanie Carmen!!!":):)~If I were "You," I would 'Never' stop writing dear lady; for "You" are simply, "A Treasure, Rare Indeed!!!":):)~"Wonderful Viewing 'Your' Absloute Beauty"~"My Love Always to 'You,' John!!!"~Smile, "Hope to See 'Your Words' Again Very Soon!!!":):) Bye Dear Lady ~
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Date: 6/9/2009 11:47:00 AM
The desire for her love to return and rekindle their past memories of love>James
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Date: 6/9/2009 10:42:00 AM
love it. peace. boo
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Date: 6/9/2009 7:14:00 AM
Love it Stefania. I am putting this in my favourites. The image and the passion is great
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Date: 6/9/2009 6:50:00 AM
"On your pillow I’d rest My tears again So you’d evenly pick them Up with the tip Of your lips. " **Pretty;You put it Out Straight and I Love yewr Beauty Of the flow and words.
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