The You In Me

Pieces of my imperfection
Lie hopelessly on display
The inner me I've come to know
Breaks a little more each day

The air I breathe is poison
Contaminated by my fear
Each breath I take, my lungs reject
Knowing you're not here

Loneliness invades my crippled mind
And deprives me of my sleep
The night, reserved for reflection
All the memories that I weep

I'm not whole without your smile
And your touch that says I'm real
An empty vessel cracked and worn
Too damaged to ever feel

The you in me gave me life
I was the lost that you had found
I was the one who died today
Though they laid you in the ground
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Taylor Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 9:46 AM
Tragic and heavyhearted, Buddy. but sadly beautiful. Ralph
Gorelick Avatar
September 30, 2010 at 7:16 AM
Lovely write Larry..the last stanza is wonderful. BG
Mehta Avatar
September 30, 2010 at 5:41 AM
Very creative and introspective write with semi-rhyming, Larry
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