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The Yellow Window Frame

Walking in a luster of brown and gold.

Leaves crunch underfoot.

Maple syrup and chimney smoke smells a-wafting through the streets.  

A chilled amber Marzen waits on the yellow window frame. 



Leaves crunch underfoot.

The smell of the pigskin pressed against my nostrils.

A chilled amber Marzen waits on the yellow window frame.

I watch my wife take a sip, a break from pie-making.



The smell of the pigskin pressed against my nostrils.

Maple syrup and chimney smoke smells a-wafting through the streets.

I watch my wife take a sip, a break from pie-making.

Walking in a luster of brown and gold.
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Dutta Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 12:00 AM
So smooth flow. A perfect Pantoum I am charmed. Have Good Days
Kerr Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 11:43 PM
Hi Matt, This work has an excellent flow, apt imagery, and an intriguing narrative. It never sags and sustains it’s momentum throughout. Please don’t apologise for any would-be delay. These things take time. Heartfelt thanks for the placement of a piece which has a special meaning for me and your compliments. Howard
Mccann Avatar
October 6, 2022 at 3:46 PM
I love the ambling gait of this. It feels just like an autumn stroll, a little warm, a little cool, a little smooth, a little crunchy. Elizabeth
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