Sara Kendrick Poet Concrete

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The Yellow Umbrella

An 

Umbrella 

Lemon-yellow brilliant 

Over my head and shoulders stooped 

Protects me from getting the chesty croup 

But praise God for long warm sunny days 

Warm inviting outside for a relaxing exhilarating stay 

Also 

Thank  

God  

For  

Your 

Cover    
                  y
                a
            d   
T o -
 

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Bj Legros Kelley April 26, 2022 at 8:31 PM Hi Sara, wisdom in this poem...take care of yourself! I love the poem and the fun yellow umbrella <3 Hope you are well and enjoying the nice sunny days! ~BJ Sara Kendrick April 27, 2022 at 5:22 AM BJ, The sunny days have been fun but we had a change yesterday and another cold front came through which was nice but we did not get any rain from it as I had hoped. I appreciate your visit to my page. It is always uplifting to have such nice comments. Sara

Jennifer Proxenos April 26, 2022 at 11:44 AM Hi Sara i have caught such a bad flu virus that i'v stiil got the flu 2 months down the line, i have had 6 lots of antibiotics and I still have not got rid of it completely. Others have had the same as me, it is more like a super bug. Enjoyed you poem and your Yellow Umbrella protecting your chest. Be well, hugs blessings, Jennifer. jENNIFER. Sara Kendrick April 26, 2022 at 1:08 PM Jennifer, So sad to learn you have been sick and still are not well. I haven't had the flu this year and I thank God that I have not. I get the immunizations every year but I have had the flu a time or two or maybe three and it is not something one would want to have. I appreciate you dropping by and taking time to comment. Sara

David Smith April 22, 2022 at 4:20 AM Excellent. Words well chosen and so descriptive and with genuine feeling. I have not done a concrete poem. Best regards David in NZ Sara Kendrick April 23, 2022 at 4:34 AM Thank you, David. I guess you can take on a concrete or shape poem and see what you can do. Sara

John Watt April 21, 2022 at 5:40 PM Sara, love your message and the lovely umbrella shape you created... these are challenging to do and you obviously put a lot of time and thought into it. I thank God for the sunny day, and for umbrellas on the rainy days (though the poor woman in the picture needs a second umbrella for her cold, bare legs!) God bless your day ~ John Sara Kendrick April 22, 2022 at 4:10 AM John, Yes, I bet those legs were cold and wet. She will probably need to sit near the source of heat to warm up when she makes it inside. Thanks for the nice review of my work. Sara

Gershon Wolf April 21, 2022 at 12:48 PM Ah, this is so well-executed, Sara! Especially love that handle -- 'today' -- at the bottom. It's the perfect finishing touch. (Here's to sunshine!) Cheers, Gershon Sara Kendrick April 21, 2022 at 1:48 PM Gershon, Clouds were back today but we did not get any rain and it did warm up this afternoon. I feel like I am walking on air after reading this comment. Your visit encouraged. Sara

Kim Rodrigues April 21, 2022 at 4:57 AM Love the poem and shape! We do thank God for his cover! <3 Great one, Sara! Sara Kendrick April 21, 2022 at 1:41 PM I am delighted that you love the poem and the shape. I wish I could do something about my shape. LOL..Then again I might be in a good shape for the shape I am in. LOL..Thanks for the visit. Sara

Andrea Dietrich April 19, 2022 at 3:03 PM so cute how you curled the handle up at the end. Very nice, Sara. Sara Kendrick April 19, 2022 at 3:55 PM Thank you, Andrea. It was not easy. It took a few practices. Sara

Sotto Poet April 19, 2022 at 7:51 AM Sara, you've created a beautiful form. I can clearly see the umbrella, and I can also sense the significance of your message. Excellent post, and also have a pleasant day. Sara Kendrick April 19, 2022 at 8:11 AM Sotto, Thanks for the offering of a pleasant day. It will be a good one just a little chilly, but we have sunshine which is a good thing. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Demetrios Trifiatis April 19, 2022 at 5:44 AM A stunning umbrella, dearest Sara. God bless you, my friend! Sara Kendrick April 19, 2022 at 7:37 AM Thank you, Demetrios. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Harry Horsman April 19, 2022 at 2:30 AM Excellent Sara. Love it. Sara Kendrick April 19, 2022 at 4:21 AM Thank you, Harry. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Valsa George April 18, 2022 at 9:08 PM Let us thank God for each day's cover ! Good one Sara ! Sara Kendrick April 19, 2022 at 4:17 AM Valsa, Yes, God's protective cover is a miracle in itself. Thank you for the visit. Sara

Eve Roper April 18, 2022 at 7:04 PM Great concert poem. Sara, I also use the umbrella when the sun is out. Eve Roper April 19, 2022 at 1:23 PM Mostly to keep Sunray’s away from my skin I get headaches and blister easy Sara Kendrick April 19, 2022 at 4:12 AM Eve, I have seen that especially on movies depicting the old south or in England, but I tried it once and it was much hotter down here in the south under that umbrella. I guess maybe I needed a white umbrella. Your visit to my page is much appreciated. Sara

Alexis Y. April 18, 2022 at 2:50 PM Hi Sara, What a lovely shape. I can see the umbrella so well. Great message as well.Good job. Have a nice day. I hope you had a wonderful Easter:-) Alexis Sara Kendrick April 19, 2022 at 4:07 AM Alexis, Your kind review is uplifting. Easter was quite interesting. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Victor Buhagiar April 18, 2022 at 12:45 PM Lovely shape. Thank God it's not windy. :) Sara Kendrick April 18, 2022 at 12:57 PM Yes, those windy days with rain eliminate the successful use of umbrellas. LOL..I appreciate your visit. Sara