The Yell

Mosquito yells, Full face blushing. Moon shadows follow my steps in night.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/26/2015 8:30:00 PM

Hi Lucky Rizo... thank you for the kind reply. LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/25/2015 7:25:00 PM

Hi Rizo, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Rizo Ale
Date: 10/26/2015 6:02:00 PM

Hey there Linda, thank you for your welcoming! ^.^ I am the lucky one. x

Skat A

Date: 10/22/2015 5:50:00 PM

Rizo, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Rizo Ale
Date: 10/23/2015 5:09:00 PM

Hi, Skat! Thank you for the lovely message ^.^ and for the warm welcoming. I would be more than happy to have you as my friend. Sending colorful hugs, Rizo