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The Writings On the Wall

Oh! Do see and behold
Of  mother and womb
The writings on the wall 
Crouching about the world so high
Their presence you can't deny
Hallelujah,  
         hallelujah,  
                   hallelujah...     
                                           Hallelujah 

Is Your faith  draining now?
As doubt begins to wain
The writings on the wall
Lovingly, you carass his hand
And usher him into silence 
Hallelujah,  
         hallelujah,  
                   hallelujah...     
                                          Hallelujah 

Many hands, worthless maids
Greater casualties of war
The writings on the wall
Life begins to fade, oh dear child of God  
your eyes have lost their light
Hallelujah,  
         hallelujah,  
                   my hallelujah...     
                                                 Hallelujah  

Angst of shallow ,lonely breathes
Tears that scar my hide
The writings on the wall 
Candle-slacken voice, light has faded
My hallelujah, 
              hallelujah,    
                        my hallelujah, 
                                                     Hallelujah 

The writings on the wall
Poverty of war, cost was my one inheritance 
Searing, blisters of pain
Hallelujah 
Emptied-out in a crowd
Chanters of my dispair
My hallelujah, 
                my hallelujah,  
                               oh hallelujah,  
                                              my hallelujah 

                                 Oh Hallelujah! 
                      Oh Hallelujah! 
           Oh Hallelujah! 
Oh Hallelujah!


2016/04/26:

Song: Hallelujah 
Picture: #1
Cliche: The writings on the wall

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Date: 5/14/2016 11:41:00 AM
congratulations on your win with this wonderfully written free verse, I love the presentation ...
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Sizwe Hlabisa
Date: 5/14/2016 4:09:00 PM
Thank you BW.... congrats on your great win in the contest
Date: 5/13/2016 8:43:00 AM
Sizwe, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead...........//:) hugs
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Sizwe Hlabisa
Date: 5/14/2016 4:07:00 PM
Thank you Manmath for the great words
Date: 5/2/2016 5:18:00 PM
SH, I love how you presented you poem, and the whole this is magic, I am loving it 7 ~
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Sizwe Hlabisa
Date: 5/3/2016 12:51:00 AM
Thanks BW, it is these words of encouragement that make poetrysoup a haven for poets and lovers of poems alike.
Date: 5/2/2016 4:00:00 PM
wow, you really got into this challenge. Hope you score well with this one, so much passion in it!
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Sizwe Hlabisa
Date: 5/3/2016 12:50:00 AM
Thanks Andrea. I gave it my best which is all I could do to tell this story.
Date: 4/27/2016 6:36:00 AM
Sizwe, a lovely sad write. Goes well with both the song and the picture.
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Sizwe Hlabisa
Date: 4/27/2016 7:23:00 AM
Thanks James... your support means a lot.

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