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Write than-bauk day Mind can't stray, starts To fray, screams no! Needs to go rest Let flow tension Retention leave Do not cleave please Like bees' stinger Written: November 28, 2020

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Reason A. Poteet

Date: 12/8/2020 3:30:00 AM

GREAT example of than bauk, Sara. A welcome read with a little more carbs to fatten our mind. Cheers on your win.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/8/2020 8:29:00 AM

Reason, Well, don't get that brain too fat and explode. Thanks for dropping by and taking time to comment. Sara

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/7/2020 4:30:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/7/2020 4:40:00 AM

Beata, Your visit to say congrats is encouraging. Thanks ..Sara

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/5/2020 8:49:00 PM

Well craftered Sara. And not just one gem! Congratulations. Blessigs for a tension free day!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/6/2020 3:31:00 AM

Sam, Thanks for dropping by with congrats. I hope it is a tension free day. Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 12/5/2020 3:06:00 PM

wow sara i struggled to write just one stanza, many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/6/2020 3:27:00 AM

Jan, They are hard to write. One would think, oh! this form is so short no problem but it isn't that way at all. Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Sara

Howard Kerr

Date: 12/5/2020 10:27:00 AM

Sara, Heartiest congratulations on your podium placement with this amazing Than-Bauk. I value your reflections on my work and the time involved. Many thanks Howard

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/5/2020 11:32:00 AM

Howard, You are quite welcome. Thanks for the congrats on my work. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

David Kavanagh

Date: 12/5/2020 9:25:00 AM

Congratulations Sara a well deserved win in the contest, cheers David

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/5/2020 11:23:00 AM

David, Thanks for taking the time to comment on my work. Getting congrats is always encouraging. Sara

Sathya Babu

Date: 12/5/2020 6:40:00 AM

Hi Sara, CONGRATS on this wonderful WIN. Nice write. I see you have written many poems in this format......it is motivating me to write too..... Thanks for the visit. Regards, Sathya

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/5/2020 7:26:00 AM

Sathya, Thanks for stopping by with congrats. I was just trying to write them again. I had written some in the past and had forgotten how hard it is to do them. Sara

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 12/4/2020 6:11:00 PM

That’s a great write! Congrats!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/5/2020 5:20:00 AM

US, I appreciate the time spent here. Thanks for congrats. Sara

Eve Roper

Date: 12/4/2020 2:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning placement. Hugs Eve

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/5/2020 5:19:00 AM

Eve, Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Sara

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/4/2020 2:15:00 PM

Hi Sara, You did a good job with the chosen form. Congratulations on your win. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/5/2020 5:19:00 AM

Alexis, Your presence at my work is uplifting. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/4/2020 2:03:00 PM

Congrats!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/5/2020 5:18:00 AM

Kim, Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Sara

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/4/2020 1:31:00 PM

As Paula Goldsmith might say, just write away! Congrats, Sara, on your win in Charlie's contest. Write on! :) gw

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/5/2020 5:18:00 AM

Gershon, Thanks for stopping by with congrats. Sara

Charles Messina

Date: 12/4/2020 12:02:00 PM

Dear Sara, I really love how you did this.. you took it to a level that tops the charts. In my contest I asked for three lines so that being said, I gave 1st place to those who did so. This was well worth the 1st place but I guess it wouldn't be fair in that sense. But I couldn't place this any lower than 2nd place. Congratulations on your placement! Stay safe. Hugs Charlie

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/5/2020 3:40:00 AM

Charles, Thanks for honoring my work by placing in your contest. I guess I missed the part about only three lines. Or I might have forgotten by the time I got around to writing. Senior moments happening more frequently. I wonder if it is my age? Sara

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 12/4/2020 4:40:00 AM

An interesting one, Sara. It flows so smoothly!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/3/2020 1:08:00 PM

good job. I strained to get out ONE stanza!

Anisha Dutta

Date: 12/1/2020 7:16:00 AM

GREAT. All the best.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/1/2020 9:31:00 AM

Anisha, Thanks for dropping by. Sara