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Here I am just a little dot to signify the end of a thought Should I go here. or maybe there. Ah, just use a comma, it will not totally interrupt that thought Whoa! Wrap it up with a semi-colon; Her thoughts just keep jumping Maybe I'll type on the parenthesis(and slow them down) Where am I placed anyway?(question) First row ring finger..... Oh! She found me now the page is filing with dots...............Stop.........stop..... Me the period a writer's friend~~~ When I'm properly used requires a breath________ Breathe now......Breathe now.. Are you resuscitated yet??? Tuesday, September 29, 2015 Sponsor: Debbie Guzzi Contest: Punctuation Personification

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Date: 10/13/2015 7:47:00 AM
longest time friend. You've just exhibited to the highest quality exactly what I have missed in here for months. Your lines are so exciting and your words are each having that second hand of drawing me back to them again and again and again irrespective of how many times I have gone through them. Its nice to be home and you are part of the reason I have this refreshing feeling. A definite 7. Cheers!
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Date: 10/9/2015 12:16:00 AM
Sara, Congratulations with your win. **SKAT**
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Date: 10/7/2015 7:54:00 PM
Made me smile Sara. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/8/2015 6:32:00 AM
Glad that it made you smile but then again laughter at my age can get a little damp..LOL..Sara
Date: 10/7/2015 3:50:00 AM
Sara Congs on this poem, i love the lines as they are crafted Bryan Loves
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Date: 9/29/2015 11:46:00 PM
Excellent. Love your poem. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 9/29/2015 1:42:00 PM
Love your poem is a winner! Hugs Eve
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