The Writer's Friend

Here I am just a little dot to signify the end of a thought 
Should I go here. or maybe there.
Ah, just use a comma, it will not totally interrupt that thought
Whoa! Wrap it up with a semi-colon;

Her thoughts just keep jumping
Maybe I'll type on the parenthesis(and slow them down)

Where am I placed anyway?(question)
First row ring finger.....
Oh! She found me now the page is filing with dots...............Stop.........stop.....

Me the period a writer's friend~~~
When I'm properly used requires a breath________
Breathe now......Breathe now..
Are you resuscitated yet???

 

Tuesday, September 29, 2015
Sponsor: Debbie Guzzi
Contest: Punctuation Personification
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Makama Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 7:47 AM
longest time friend. You've just exhibited to the highest quality exactly what I have missed in here for months. Your lines are so exciting and your words are each having that second hand of drawing me back to them again and again and again irrespective of how many times I have gone through them. Its nice to be home and you are part of the reason I have this refreshing feeling. A definite 7. Cheers!
A  Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 12:16 AM
Sara, Congratulations with your win. **SKAT**
Guzzi Avatar
October 7, 2015 at 7:54 PM
Made me smile Sara. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 6:32 AM
Glad that it made you smile but then again laughter at my age can get a little damp..LOL..Sara
Oule Avatar
October 7, 2015 at 3:50 AM
Sara Congs on this poem, i love the lines as they are crafted Bryan Loves
Sathasivam Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 11:46 PM
Excellent. Love your poem. Thanks for sharing it.
Roper Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 1:42 PM
Love your poem is a winner! Hugs Eve
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