The Writer In Me Wants You To Know

The writer in me wants you to know
Challenges in life causes one to grow

The hurt and shame one will endure
Can cause vision to become obscure

Not settling for the prostrate position
Overcoming was achieved; I identified the condition

Of low self-esteem and all it entails
Had my mind messed up ‘cause I thought I failed

Failed to be what he wanted and desired
When looking back, I realize he conspired

To belittle me and keep me down
But here I am today with a re-positioned crown

No longer a prisoner of his demands
I took matters within so I could stand

On my own two feet I had to show
Challenges in life causes one to grow


~ Ms. Affection - August 3, 2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 12/21/2023 8:12:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 12/18/2023 8:43:00 PM
Let that crown shine!
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Date: 8/6/2021 10:24:00 PM
I've learned this lesson too. I enjoyed your poem. It's good to be reminded now and then..
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Ms Affection
Date: 8/7/2021 2:44:00 PM
Thank you Virginia. I appreciate your feedback and kind words
Date: 8/5/2021 5:54:00 AM
Such an inspiring poem .Very well written.
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Date: 8/5/2021 10:43:00 AM
Thank you Garima. your input is appreciated
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