The Wounded

Clever, clever, Art!! :) Well done!! Big Hugggs deb!!

Ha ha ha... I was like so sad and feeling all the emotions until... Disneyland! Lol! Great poem arthur :)

That last line completely threw me, Arthur. Disneyland? Booo...that's supposed to be all fun under the sun. Good write...I'm with Connie.

Your poem would stand alone, deep and profound even without the last line. It could be taken metaphorically as well. Great work Arthur! : )

All the more reason to keep wearing your mouseketeer ears. I'm trying to keep mine on... Enjoyed it Arthur...

is Disneyland Fantasy land i wonder, like this brief but to the point poem, arthur.

what an unusual ending, Arthur! I really enjoyed this one. May we all end up in a Disneyland of sorts!!

:-) Hugs Eve

Wounded but not dead. Love for something or someone hangs on. When that love is gone I'll be first on that road. We are all wounded in some way but as we help other woundeds we heal. The moral is: Find someone to help and you will live again.

that is why we have disneyland...life is a luscious dream, no matter what!.. so creative, compelling, arthur!..huggs

Arthur you just won the world championship of poetry...what you going to do now??.... excellent piece in your uniquely melancholy style

A final wish to bring them joy..A poignant write Arthur

- Love verse number 2 ... the end is wonderful :))) - .... with Mickey Mouse and Donald Duck :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Woo-Hoo, Disneyland! I know this write is more than just talking about the joys of Disneyland, but I just had to get excited about it, I love the theme park...it's an awesome place! I thought you have written a magnificent poem about more than just the theme park...it all comes together when you said, "To that last road that ends/Where a new life begins" so deep! Great Work my friend, I loved it!!