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The Worry Machine

The clothes we wear get dirty Or, once worn, are not so fresh, So they get cleaned (or should) before They’re back against our flesh. Now wouldn’t it be wonderful If, like our dirty wash, Our problems could be laundered And would disappear? Oh gosh! We’d load our worries and our stress, Each sorrow, dread and fear Into some contraption, spinning ‘til They all would disappear. Each day would start out crisp and clean And we could reassert Our better selves, at least until, The build-up of new dirt.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 7/31/2021 7:39:00 PM
I like the idea of 'laundering our problems" - great mind, my friend!
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Date: 7/26/2021 8:16:00 PM
Your poems, although very truthful in some ways, are full of humor. Great work!
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Date: 7/26/2021 6:04:00 PM
That would be quite a machine, Ilene. Unfortunately worries and stresses are never far from any of us, and we'd we using that machine daily until we'd need a new one. / Maurice
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Date: 7/25/2021 10:07:00 PM
Love the rhythm Ilene. Trevor
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Date: 7/21/2021 1:37:00 PM
A most cute and enjoyable poem, Ilene. So far I wash and rinse my worries by hand, and I can assure you it's not an easy job....so do let me know when that machine hits the market :) ~ Best regards // paul
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Date: 7/21/2021 1:24:00 PM
You could be onto a winner there Ilene. Tom
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Date: 7/21/2021 12:34:00 PM
I love your write and your idea for this machine. Are you selling them??? I want one. Love your line, "They all would disappear." Yes, disappear. Have a blessed day..............
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Date: 7/21/2021 11:59:00 AM
I tried that but I always get dizzy in the spin cycle. : ) This was cute Ilene and definitely something that would be nice if we could do it.
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Date: 7/21/2021 11:18:00 AM
The Christians have baptism, which does not make much sense as, just like a bathtub, all their sins rise to the surface like scum which re-attaches as one leaves the water . . . . . .
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