The World's Big Apple

From an awesome fountain, teeming with life
Out of her depths arose a city of lights
Built upon the shoulders of native sons
A place of hope, liberty, and freedom invites

For centuries her gates have been open wide
Welcoming hoards of strangers from afar 
Bringing multiple cultures, traditions, cuisines and skills
Now a “melting pot”, a bright, twinkling star

Her people once thought of as cold, and uncaring 
On broad streets, and alleys, the death toll was high
Now a change of heart for the better is born in
The world's "Big Apple" reaching to the sky
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 13, 2010 at 3:45 PM
I like the positive spin you put on this. Nice.
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May 13, 2010 at 2:48 PM
A delightful write to a most wonderful city Audrey. Many congratulations in Carolyn's contest >> James
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May 13, 2010 at 10:49 AM
Congrats Audrey BBF on your winning poem in the Phoenix Rising contest with this amazing Quatrain depicting the photo presented perfectly... enjoy another lovely win ..your BBF Linda-Marie..
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May 13, 2010 at 10:44 AM
Congratulations Audrey, on your take of the photo and #3 place. Agape, Moses
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May 13, 2010 at 10:24 AM
Congratulations on your third place win with this great poem, Audrey. Best wishes, Carolyn
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May 8, 2010 at 10:03 PM
this sounds great, i love the flow of it.you did well on this write. a bright twinkling star it is(: your imagery in this is awesome as well. -Always&Forever Lynette
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May 7, 2010 at 2:28 PM
Beautiful write my BBF and best of luck in the contest... I have been at the beach a lot lately and not on site too much except for my contests now running like wildfire... hope all is well with u as u are writing and creating lovely poetry... happy weekend BBF... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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May 7, 2010 at 11:36 AM
another great read Audrey, job well done lots of words describing a fine LADY. you are saying she is lady, Miss New York, enjoyed,..p.d.
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May 7, 2010 at 11:32 AM
LOVE IT, ENJOYED THE READ OF MY MOST FAVORITE PLACE IN NEW YORK,,IRMA
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