The World Through My Window

Through the window there is a white world
Crisp, still and somehow unreal
Deep footprints lead from the back door
To the coal bunker and back again
No traffic on the road to the sandy beach
Just children oblivious to the cold
The robin that enters the house for food
Must now nurture itself plein air
And the blackbird, soloist of the sky choir
With joy gives thanks to all who listen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 3, 2010 at 7:33 AM
Keep that encouraging spirit going Eamon.. and have confidence in your words... they are brilliant .. luv..happy weekend to u and appreciate your warm and always welcome comments.. luv..
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December 3, 2010 at 4:39 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry today. I enjoyed reading it Eamon. Love, Carol
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December 2, 2010 at 12:41 PM
Elegant piece Eamon.. a wonderful imaginative setting u have penned here with visual and vivid birds and song... continue to enter contests .. do not let anyone discourage u by comments unkind or dissuade u from entering ..contests are for FUN and experience in learning new forms ...your participation is welcomed my friend... enjoy your poetry with its intensity very much .. appreciate your lovely comments to me...
Mehta Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 10:27 AM
Thnx Eamon for viewing my poem, "Orphans way of Lifes perspective" and leaving nice comments.... Luv/Best wishes....Hitendra Mehta
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December 2, 2010 at 9:57 AM
That's a lovely vision seen through your window (and your words) Eamon.
Mehta Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 9:39 AM
I expect your entry in my contest Christmas Wreath, Eamon
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December 2, 2010 at 9:35 AM
Your poem creates an image similar to Norman Rockwell's artistry, Eamon. I smiled thinking how children do seem to be "oblivious to the cold." Especially love the creative description of the blackbird as a "soloist of the sky choir." Beautiful poem, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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