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The Word Became Flesh

The hand extended was our remedy, death being everyone’s curse. Adonai, making expiation, furnishing life eternal, sacrified himself. ————— expiation - removal of sin Adonai - literally, ‘Lord’, one of many names for the Godhead for the Christmas Poetry Contest sponsored by Bobby May written on 12/15/22

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Date: 12/18/2022 12:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful acrostic write. Blessings................
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Date: 12/18/2022 6:45:00 AM
Awesome Jeff. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 12/17/2022 6:09:00 AM
Yes, His hand extended…the most beautiful moment in our time. Congratulations, Jeff!
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Date: 12/15/2022 7:25:00 PM
Great acrostic on a beautiful theme, The Word Became Flesh. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/15/2022 7:16:00 PM
gorgeous pen Jeff!
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Date: 12/15/2022 1:34:00 PM
Beautiful acrostic, I like to call these types a narrative acrostic b/c they tell a story as well as using the first letters of each word as a line starter. Lovely spiritual piece.
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Date: 12/15/2022 1:19:00 PM
Good job, explicitly stated. John
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Date: 12/15/2022 12:07:00 PM
Excellent
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