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“The woods are lovely, dark and deep, but I have promises to keep, and miles to go before I sleep” (Robert Frost). The woods know my secrets For I open my heart In this enclosed sanctuary of God As folded branches draw my eyes Upward, ever upward Towards the emerald ceiling With a skylight From which streams The light of heaven Pure and sweet On my face The trees are my counselors Sacred dispensers Of the mysteries of God Sentinels tall and majestic Guarding my hushed sacred hours Of contemplation and renewal The would be silence Sweetly disturbed By the sounds of His creatures Filling God’s outdoor sanctuary With a heavenly hymn of praise Each trail leads me deeper and deeper For my heart longs to be In the Holy of Holies In the very presence of the Creator On holy ground Yes, Yes! He is here His presence Envelopes me After my communion The closing benediction of sunlight Guides me home The thinning trees whisper “Forget us not” stories to me As I pass them by Stories of long ago pilgrims From another time Yet one with me The same Pilgrims in search of sanctuary A place of solace A place of tenderness A place of discovery Where they come to learn The miles left to go Till journey’s end When they must lie down In well deserved sleep Safe under the shadows Of God’s mighty trees Resting, resting Blissful sleep In the Sanctuary In HIS sanctuary In the woods….. Eileen Manassian

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Date: 10/6/2016 8:41:00 AM
The title drew me in...I must admit. I love this poem by Robert Frost....but who doesn't right? :^D Very nice piece here...a different take on the woods from Frost. Even threw in some history too...nice work here! MC
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Date: 6/2/2016 8:19:00 PM
I love trees and it's so cool how you wove the image of those pilgrims with thoughts similar to yours into this beautiful poem, Eileen. Wonderful.
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Date: 6/1/2016 7:22:00 PM
As a kid I would spend the entire summer hols in the woods, they've always seemed peaceful and magical to me, but never more so after reading this write. Take care, Richard
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Date: 6/1/2016 6:23:00 AM
Hugs back to you Eileen.
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Date: 5/31/2016 1:01:00 PM
It is a pity that we lack woods like these in my country, Eileen; that is why when I go abroad I take pleasure in walking through them. This poem reminds me of similar thoughts and feelings which come to me then... indeed, a serene sanctuary, a place for meditation. Hugs // paul
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/31/2016 1:13:00 PM
Thank you, dear. "I think that I shall never see...a poem lovely as a tree." ;) You should see our forest of cedars. Breathtaking. Perhaps...one day you will. Miss you....Hugs
Date: 5/31/2016 10:41:00 AM
My heart was flooded with warmth and love -- words that invited me into a worship and prayer -- refreshed, encouraged, and loved -- I am really to face the day! Outstanding LO -- I am glad I dropped by today!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/31/2016 11:47:00 AM
Thanks, David. Always lovely to hear from you. I hope you have posted something as well. :) I miss having you around here. I'm glad you liked this piece. It is actually a repost I did for a contest once. Hugs... :)
Date: 5/31/2016 7:25:00 AM
Mystifying and spiritual! I found myself in nature's Cathedral dearest, Eileen! A seven times seven!
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Date: 5/31/2016 11:48:00 AM
I'm so happy that you liked this write, my dear esteemed poet. God bless you for your lovely words of commendation. Hugs to you....
Date: 5/31/2016 12:18:00 AM
You made me feel the majesty, the picture was inadequate to do justice to your words. Bravo Eileen. Hugs Rick.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/31/2016 11:59:00 AM
That is a comment that brings me joy. :) Thank you, Richard. I know that you are sincere in what you write. I'm grateful. Hugs
Date: 5/30/2016 6:47:00 PM
oh no, I have to, again, wow wow wow, its not only the beauty but the sincerity and depth of this write that captivated me, you are truly a poetess!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/30/2016 10:10:00 PM
I can never tire of those wows, my dear. Thanks ever so much for bolstering my morale. Hugs
Date: 5/30/2016 6:04:00 PM
Beautiful and inspirational, Eileen! Vivid descriptions that made me long to be there. Love, Kim
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/30/2016 10:12:00 PM
I'm glad, Kim....there is a beauty in nature that inevitably draws the heart to the Creator. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece.
Date: 5/30/2016 4:32:00 PM
Believe your eyes... it's Kenny!!!!! Absolutely lovely poem my dear Betty Boop... please forgive! Love and hugs, Kenny xox
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/30/2016 10:12:00 PM
Hello, dear.....I've missed you. Thanks for the visit, dear. :) Smiles from Beirut.
Date: 5/30/2016 1:52:00 PM
Nicely expressed, Eileen. You have imparted a sense of majesty and blissful tranquility all neatly rolled up into one charming little package...really all quite enchanting! My very best regards as always, Eileen. :) john
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Date: 5/30/2016 10:14:00 PM
I love the words you've chosen for your post here, John. Very beautiful...They have touched my heart. Bless you for it, dear. Hugs
Date: 5/30/2016 1:04:00 PM
- This has a beauty that appeals to the heart, brain and the eye, dear Eileen - hugs and a 7 // Anne-Lise :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/30/2016 10:16:00 PM
:) A multisensory experience, then. Thanks, Sunshine. Loved your warmth today. Hugs
Date: 5/30/2016 12:14:00 PM
Within this piece,I find communion with my own first offering to Soup.It's called "On sacred ground."I can relate many of the images and visions expressed here.Yes the woods are result of God's creative self,and a blessed sanctuary for pilgrims like us to rest and contemplate god's eternal mystery. Brilliantly well done,Eileen.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/30/2016 11:24:00 PM
It is a sanctuary where one can go to for comfort and protection. Yes, Miraj....nature is a place where we can meet with the Creator and find peace and tranquility. I will check out your poem later on today. Thank you for your visit. :)

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