The Woods

On quiet nights 
the woods are wicked.
Terrifyingly dark.
Unknowable evil lurks
just beyond the clearing
moaning, creaking, thumping,
haunting.
In the woods.

When there’s trouble
in the yard,
flee to safety 
in the woods.
Shelter in shadows,
breathe sweet relief,
become invisible
in the darkness
which fuels nightmares
on quiet nights.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kendrick Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 5:21 PM
The use of opposing emotions about the woods is a great tool used here..I enjoyed reading your work..The title got my atttention..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Grahamburglar Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 5:24 PM
Hi Sara, thank you for reading, and for your feedback. I truly appreciate it.
Yates Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 6:05 PM
Way above what we normally see on this forum.
Grahamburglar Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 6:13 PM
Thanks. I am kind of toying with the idea that circumstances can dramatically alter our perceptions. In this case, the woods can be either the terror or the haven depending on the frame of mind of the subject. It was just a thought I was toying with last night. I would like to polish this one up a little, but I wanted to get it out my brain so I wouldn't forget about it.
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