The Wondrous Stream


Consistently, you move along, 
   winding in and out,
gliding with stealth and grace-
   a stream that began 
so narrow and small, but
   grew to a wondrous length.

With a weave of branchlets, 
   jutting everywhere, 
joining in freely from 
   the most powerful
central source, you gift your 
   constant, gushing song.

Oh, great rushing stream, 
   you are the sacred life
that feeds this precious place
   where you flow, day after day,
with steady, pulsing ripples
   from your core.

From an endless surge, you
   and your tiny streamlets
nourish well this host.
   Oh, sweet gift of life!
I am alive- by your full stream 
   of rich, flowing blood.


Sandra M. Haight

~3rd Place~
Contest: Strand Special 11
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Judged: 12/29/2019

~3rd Place~
Premiere Contest: Intensity ~ Theme Stream
Sponsor: Julia Ward
Judged: 04/25/2019
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Chiri Avatar
December 29, 2019 at 4:21 PM
Sandra congrats on your win!;)
Haight Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 6:15 PM
Thank you, Brenda! Hugs, Sandra
Rodgers Avatar
May 2, 2019 at 4:05 PM
Well done, I especially like the shape of your poem.
Haight Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 6:01 PM
Thank you very much, D.W., for your visit and positive comment. Much appreciated. Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 11:59 AM
Wow Sandra. Congrats on your well deserved podium finish.
Haight Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 2:39 PM
Thanks so much, Line. I enjoyed taking it 'outside the box'! Hugs, Sandra :)
Ward Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 11:56 AM
Beautifully conceived. Congratulations on your poem's third place, Sandra.
Haight Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 2:37 PM
Thanks for the very inspiring contest, Julia, and for my podium placement. Very much appreciated! Sandra
Cholt Avatar
April 2, 2019 at 5:21 PM
Circulation personified!
Haight Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 3:58 PM
Thanks, W.A. Your visit and supportive comment are much appreciated. Sandra
Mchattie Avatar
April 2, 2019 at 12:24 PM
Lovely poem. Such imagery. Nicely done.
Haight Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 3:58 PM
Thank you so much, David! Much appreciated! Sandra
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