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The Wonder of Creation

THE WONDER OF CREATION A bird builds a nest of sticks, feathers, leaves, and grass Tiny eggs appear They break open as days pass Baby birds soon find the air Time soon flits away Baby birds, now fully grown Spend time on the lawn Seeking a fat worm to eat Winter comes, birds are now gone 28 December 2017 For contest sponsored by Rick Parise

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Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/28/2017 10:41:00 PM

Succinct, darling penning. My best to you! xomo

Curtis Moorman
Date: 12/29/2017 4:34:00 AM

Thank you, Maureen, for your kind comment, your ever present support, and encouragement.

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/28/2017 5:16:00 PM

Yes the title fits your wonderful created tanka, Curtis. Happy new Year.

Curtis Moorman
Date: 1/19/2018 9:19:00 PM

Harry, I appreciate your response. I was in and out of bed fighting the flu from the 23rd of Dec til the 5th of Jan. I missed replying to your comment. I am pleased by your reference to the title fitting the tanka.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/28/2017 2:10:00 PM

We also see ourselves in your little verse! Nice!

Curtis Moorman
Date: 12/28/2017 2:24:00 PM

Kim, thank you so much for your support and encouragement. I didn't start out as seeing ourselves I what I wrote, but your astute observation vividly points it out. Thanks for sharing that observation.

Charlie Smith

Date: 12/28/2017 2:02:00 PM

Good one Curtis, best wishes in the...contest

Curtis Moorman
Date: 12/28/2017 2:21:00 PM

Thank you, Charlie. I appreciate your support. I trust you had a Merry Christmas and are looking forward to a great New Year!