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The Wonder of Bread

The WONDER of Bread you can butter it toast it spam it jam it roll it in a ball green egg and ham it slather it with anything that can be spread but you can’t make a sandwich without bread. John G. Lawless 5/31/2015 submitted to – Sing Me..A Jingle! – Poetry Contest sponsor – Lyric Man

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Skat A

Date: 7/19/2015 2:44:00 PM

John, that's a cool JINGLE! CONGRATS!!!!! SKAT

John Lawless
Date: 7/20/2015 5:22:00 AM

Thanks again SKAT for your continued support.

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/19/2015 12:30:00 AM

Oh, crumbs, the competition has been hot for this contest. Well done, John, Regards, Viv

John Lawless
Date: 7/20/2015 5:20:00 AM

Thanks Viv, some of the early jingles still rattle through the caverns of my cranial canyons on occasion.

Eve Roper

Date: 7/18/2015 10:41:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, John, french toast Hugs Eve

John Lawless
Date: 7/20/2015 5:19:00 AM

...only with REAL.....NEW ENGLAND MAPLE SYRUP.....

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 7/18/2015 2:57:00 PM

you forgot it will last generations with all the preservatives in it, lol. Oh it makes great dough balls when fishing too. Nice write, liked the form congrats.

John Lawless
Date: 7/20/2015 5:18:00 AM

Robert, the brand name was WONDER BREAD and yes it was a staple of our dropline fishing expeditions and it had a half life close to that of radium....

Tim Smith

Date: 7/18/2015 2:13:00 PM

No wonder you got top marks...I toast you John...congrats

John Lawless
Date: 7/20/2015 5:16:00 AM

...lightly buttered with jam..... thanks Tim

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/18/2015 1:50:00 PM

Congrats on your awesome win:-)Alexis

John Lawless
Date: 7/20/2015 5:16:00 AM

Thanks Alexis for stopping by to read and comment

Jan Allison

Date: 7/18/2015 1:29:00 PM

Dropping back with my congratulations John:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 6/4/2015 6:33:00 PM

John, amazing 7 love your jingle and thanks for visiting my poem, sweet , Cinquain would be a great name but it is Eve Snuggles friend of Pearl Smudges

John Lawless
Date: 7/20/2015 5:15:00 AM

Thanks BW, for your continuing support and the high mark

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/4/2015 11:30:00 AM

Ok, you got me here. I saw "lyric" and I saw "Bread" and was expecting "Bread" as in the music band, Bread. Goodness though, now you just made me hungry reading this, so many yummy possibilities with bread. So true, how one can't make sandwich without bread-- made me think how I think it was the Earl of Sandwich, being so intent to play his card games one handed, he thought of having his meats as filling for bread. Or something like that =Sandwiches Thanks for sharing your thoughts in my write!

John Lawless
Date: 7/20/2015 5:14:00 AM

and his memory lives on in gustatory legend

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/1/2015 1:02:00 PM

Yep, very catchy jingle and a wonderful entry John! Best of luck with it.

John Lawless
Date: 7/20/2015 5:12:00 AM

Connie we ate WONDER BREAD - "helps build strong bodies eight ways" while growing up. Not sure if they still make it. It was the perfect bed for a Fluff-er-nutter sandwich..??? that's Peanut Butter and Marshmallow Fluff as combination that is probably banned in all the healthy eating domiciles of the world....BUT OH SO DELICIOUS....

Skat A

Date: 6/1/2015 6:49:00 AM

a fun read, good luck:), enjoyed this one ~Luv S.K.A.T.

John Lawless
Date: 6/1/2015 7:49:00 AM

OK SKAT, now go have some tea and toast with jam.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/1/2015 4:12:00 AM

this really sings, john.. 'butter it toast it spam it jam it roll it'.. the repetition is so engaging... a fun, delightful lyric!.. huggs

John Lawless
Date: 6/1/2015 7:47:00 AM

Yeah, Nette, I find jingles somewhat like dominoes.....once it starts it keeps rolling to the finish.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/1/2015 1:55:00 AM

very clever jingle John - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx

John Lawless
Date: 6/1/2015 7:46:00 AM

Ah yes, "clever"...I've always liked that word and its multiple interpretations and implications.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/31/2015 11:13:00 PM

COOL JINGLE, John!. I think it is just the right size too. I went overboard with mine!! When I was trying to be more serious about my diet, I would eat the breadless sandwiches. I think "in and Out' burgers serves them on a a lettuce leaf. hahaha.

John Lawless
Date: 6/1/2015 7:44:00 AM

I think the marketing idea behind the "jingle" is to have it pop into your mind as you shop and lead you to "their" product. Mostly I remember the jingles....but not what they were selling.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/31/2015 8:44:00 PM

You can put a lot of stuff in it, sir! You are just too funny!!

John Lawless
Date: 6/1/2015 7:42:00 AM

I thought of naming it "An Ode to the Brown Baggers".