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SHE was beautiful in ways that weren’t the norm, Her nuances, her fun, her yes, I loved her “Do it here- Do it now- All or nothing” style, Yet I fled from her address. Then, SHE wore a random erratic, progressively proud, In her unconventional war, I loved everything about her, but I left as fast as I could, Through the front screen door. And SHE challenged all that I feared, challenged all that I loved, Loving me hard each day, Always happy to see me and break the rule, against a wall, Still, I watched her float away. From a spontaneous travel, to a defined blazing show, To a loud, red hot cyclone, These are the women who’ve held my heart in their hand, The women that I have known.

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