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THE WOMAN WHO WAITED TOO LONG


THE WOMAN WHO WAITED TOO LONG

               Empty womb
        Springs tumble winters
              The clock ticks

            Plum blossoms
         Yearnings of passion
               Wept away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/31/2013 9:40:00 PM
Victoria, congratulations with your poem in frank's "Something to forget " contest. enjoyed the ending... pd
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Date: 1/22/2013 7:27:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Victoria - xxxRalph
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Date: 1/22/2013 2:24:00 PM
strong images they feel more senryu...Conrad's on your winning writes. Light & Love
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Date: 1/22/2013 2:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Victoria. Love, Su
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Date: 1/21/2013 9:27:00 PM
Great job, congrats on win!
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Date: 1/7/2013 8:37:00 AM
I love these haiku Victoria!Very nice.
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Date: 1/7/2013 8:36:00 AM
22 syllables ............ with all the possible highest respect - a stuffed turkey is an empoty hole compared to this haiku as glorious and delightful filled with feelings and metaphors
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