Get Your Premium Membership

THE WOMAN WHO WAITED TOO LONG

THE WOMAN WHO WAITED TOO LONG Empty womb Springs tumble winters The clock ticks Plum blossoms Yearnings of passion Wept away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/31/2013 9:40:00 PM
Victoria, congratulations with your poem in frank's "Something to forget " contest. enjoyed the ending... pd
Login to Reply
Date: 1/22/2013 7:27:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Victoria - xxxRalph
Login to Reply
Date: 1/22/2013 2:24:00 PM
strong images they feel more senryu...Conrad's on your winning writes. Light & Love
Login to Reply
Date: 1/21/2013 9:27:00 PM
Great job, congrats on win!
Login to Reply
Date: 1/7/2013 8:37:00 AM
I love these haiku Victoria!Very nice.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/7/2013 8:36:00 AM
22 syllables ............ with all the possible highest respect - a stuffed turkey is an empoty hole compared to this haiku as glorious and delightful filled with feelings and metaphors
Login to Reply