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The Wolfman. ( 1941 and 2010.)

Soon the sun will set and the moon will rise. Stay safe and stay here or he will find you. Sleek silver hunter with red rabid eyes The sun starts to set. The moon starts to rise. He growls lupine rage. This predator spies his victim, alone. He leaps straight and true. The sun disappears. The moon is your eyes. Stay safe and stay here or he will find you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/6/2010 11:49:00 AM
Congratulations Gerard on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest "Movie Scene Triolet". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/5/2010 3:26:00 PM
Way to go, Gerard! YOu scored in my triolet contest!! Congratulations. Loved the imagery in this one. andrea
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Date: 8/5/2010 8:32:00 AM
Congratulations, Gerard!! I think I'll stay safe and stay here....just in case!! Good advice!! :)
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Date: 8/5/2010 8:11:00 AM
Congrats Gerard on your big win in Andrea's contest with this wonderful write on the Wolfman.. luv that original horror movie with Lon Chaney.. wow.. perfect win..my friend.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 7/26/2010 12:22:00 PM
Nice use of alliteration to share your thoughts. Thank you for your comment on my poem. Sorry for the delay in responding but I've decided to take a break from the Soup. I still plan to stop by from time to time. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/24/2010 9:44:00 PM
very visual write, good movie choice , loved it
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Date: 7/24/2010 5:44:00 PM
I haven't seen the older version.....but I love the choice!! There is a darkness and a bit of fright in this write!! Great Job!! Good luck in the contest Gerard....this is terrific! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 7/24/2010 5:40:00 PM
It's nice worded write. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 7/24/2010 4:45:00 PM
intresting way to show the movie in words..Good luck if it is for Andrea's movie contest. Have a nice day,..p.d.
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