The Witches of Halloween

Face to face with the witches of Halloween
curse black jellybeans

Zombie doctors, unbeating hearts out of whack
raisins giving back

Mad scientists, green goggles, double helix
rejecting trail mix

Undead bug blasters, squishing out eight-legged lice
No to apple slice

String cheese does not bring
Candy's following
Face to face with the witches of Halloween...

10/30/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Watt Avatar
September 14, 2020 at 12:46 PM
Really clever use of this form to describe the ghoulish trick-or-treaters in line 1 and the health food snacks they reject in line 2. I remember trick-or-treating as a kid (back in the Teddy Roosevelt administration) and receiving Alka-Seltzer tablets for indigestion! Very funny - wish I'd brought an egg for his front window! Super fun to read, thank you for the recommendation (which I just saw today, sadly!)
Faulkner Avatar
September 14, 2020 at 10:26 PM
No worries - funny how Halloween is over a month away but we're hearing a lot about it, wonder how trick or treating will work with covid?
Michaels Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 11:32 AM
A playful write with a great rhythm. Nicely done, Michelle. Good luck in the contest. Regards, John.
Faulkner Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 7:00 PM
Thanks so much, John.
Duncan Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 3:13 PM
Awesome rhyme you got up there :)
Faulkner Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 10:51 PM
Thank you, Debbie, for your kind compliment!
Kiser Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 3:45 PM
Oh that's a good one; best of luck with the contests.
Faulkner Avatar
November 4, 2018 at 6:29 PM
Thanks for your comment!
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 31, 2018 at 5:08 AM
Reminds me of some lady (probably married to or was a dentist herself) handing out toothbrushes for Halloween! Word spread fast not to go to her place! LOL. Loved these! Have a Happy Halloween! : )
Faulkner Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 9:51 AM
Thanks, Connie, Happy Halloween to you too!
Mcferran Avatar
October 30, 2018 at 4:59 PM
Ahahahaha- This is so hilarious, Michelle! ;D So perfectly penned (and true)! LOVE it!
Faulkner Avatar
October 30, 2018 at 10:55 PM
Thanks for your comment, my friend-
Andresen Avatar
October 30, 2018 at 1:08 PM
- The power of the spirits ... Halloween has become a fun celebration for big and small .... with witches, vampires, ghosts, zombies and monsters are creepy things - Good luck in the contest, Michelle :) - Happy Halloween :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Faulkner Avatar
October 30, 2018 at 1:30 PM
Thanks, hope you enjoy your Halloween!
Green Avatar
October 30, 2018 at 12:46 PM
This was so funny...it hit me at the second verse what you were saying and couldn't stop laughing. Really cool Michelle.
Faulkner Avatar
October 30, 2018 at 1:30 PM
Thanks, Chris, happy you liked it (I always hated getting something 'healthy' when I was a kid!)
Green Avatar
October 30, 2018 at 12:48 PM
I forgot, best of luck in the contest.
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