The Wishing Well

I've been venturing back
Venturing close,
So close,
Too close
To the Wishing Well

I was far away and forgetful
They say ignorance
Is the only true bliss
I danced with the grass and
I slept in fields of flowers
My thoughts rarely turned
To the Wishing Well

But the clouds rolled over
And the sun hid away
A breeze chilled my heart
The flowers less vibrant,
The grass less green,
My thoughts had returned
To the Wishing Well

And I run my hand
Over wet jagged rocks
And I sit on the edge
Peering down down down
And I scream down in
To the Wishing Well

These days I can't seem
To stay away
It's calling it's begging
A mysterious beckoning void
So I turn my back on the meadow
And I want to jump back in
To the Wishing Well
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Poteet Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 8:49 PM
The call of entitlement, wishes for free when the meadow calls for participation, involvement, effort. I like the jagged rocks, I like the screaming, I like the mysterious beckoning void. Great piece, Vella. Worthy of the high placement in the contest.
Taliare Avatar
February 5, 2017 at 2:51 PM
Thank you!
Smith Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 11:28 AM
So very well done and a most deserving honor...
Taliare Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 6:17 PM
Thank you so much, Charlie!
Krampe Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 12:44 PM
Beautiful - congrats on your win, Vella.
Taliare Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 6:17 PM
Thank you, Agnes!
Martin Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 11:38 AM
Sad, but great poem Vella! Congratulations! :-)
Taliare Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 6:16 PM
Thanks so much, Mark!
Kimathi Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 6:47 AM
Brilliant piece!! Cograts Vella, for your well, deserved second placement in the contest!!! ;-)
Taliare Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 6:16 PM
Thank you, Teddy!!
Asuncion Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 7:50 PM
Excellent poem.... congrats on being featured....
Thompson Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 9:19 AM
Love the transition in this poem from light to dark. Well done.
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