The Wish Was You and I

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A monument to precious arts, a masterpiece you are
With imposing high Baroque columns regally looking down
Upon the dream of sculptors and vision of the Roman era 
Evoking ancient memoirs from grandeur of renaissance.

Tickling your marble stature, foaming water giggles down
As you empower Oceanus on a chariot lead by Tritons
Beaming your glamorous sight on authentic ornate art
Dazzling decorative architecture for enchanted crowds.

When street winds bellow in, shimmering bright light-beams
In your stare you hold strangers, as they sing your praises.
Enhancing theme, Trevi Fountain, you arouse playful gleams 
Flaunting your smiles upon glittering green water streams.
 
Splendor of Neptune emanates from your renown beauty
Granting wishes of the sensuous amorous sensibilities--
Seeking sea-God's blessings, they toss in two lucky coins
And in reply you echo their vibes: the wish was you and I.

June 15, 2019
Placed 2nd: Your choice (10) personification contest by Brian Strand
NOTE:
The Trevi Fountain is a tourist attraction located in Rome, Italy. The fountain is famous for its Baroque architecture and decorative ornate art. The center piece is the Greek sea God Oceanus (representing the sea God Neptune), riding his chariot pulled by two sea horses and accompanied by two Tritons. Throwing two coins in the fountain symbolizes romance. One coin assures return trip to Rome. Three coins symbolize wedding bells.

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Date: 1/21/2022 3:01:00 AM
You have painted a masterpiece... on seeing this marble statue with water cascading down. I am sure this sight would send any visitor to raptures as your poem has done to me. This goes into my fav, dear Vijay !
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Date: 12/4/2020 5:26:00 PM
I would love to see this fountain. Looks very beautiful as is your poem, Vijay :)
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Date: 6/22/2019 8:11:00 PM
It is my pleasure to return to partake in the beauty of your lovely poem once more and to extend my congratulations to you, Vijay, for a wonderful win. Warmest wishes always, my friend.. ~Susan
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/23/2019 7:32:00 AM
Thank you for the return visit Susan..much appreciate your kind remarks.
Date: 6/21/2019 8:59:00 PM
A wish comes true, for you- as your words are felt. I know they move me. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. ~ Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/22/2019 7:19:00 AM
Much appreciate Brandy..thank you my friend.
Date: 6/20/2019 7:27:00 AM
All comments from part of 6/16 and all of 6/17 and all of my responses to your comments were lost in the system crash. If your comment is not seen here..that's the reason. Much appreciate your visit my friends.
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Date: 6/18/2019 7:40:00 AM
Filled with wonder as you describe the beautiful architecture of the fountain. I loved it. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/16/2019 4:05:00 PM
Making a wish at the Fontana di Trevi is a must when you are in Rome! In your poem you have captured the beauty of this popular location, Vijay. Regards // paul
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Date: 6/16/2019 2:40:00 PM
how picturesque and splendid is your work, vijay.. i throw coins every time i am in italy... i like!...huggs
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Date: 6/16/2019 12:46:00 PM
Another beauty, Vijay! Janice
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Date: 6/16/2019 11:27:00 AM
what a beautiful way to take that challenge, Vijay. I love your concept here.
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Date: 6/16/2019 10:49:00 AM
I'm gonna go see myself...I know it impressed you by the way you wrote...I wanna throw a few coins in the wishing well...
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Date: 6/16/2019 6:27:00 AM
You wrote this so well Vijay, ive never been but my daughter has and told me how spectacular it was . Brilliant verse capturing the beauty of it. Tom
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Date: 6/16/2019 5:03:00 AM
There isn't a poem that you Pen Vijay, which is not spectacular - your very essence you pour into your writes, Glad the 2 coins thrown in the fountain in Rome gave the the vibes of the wish you wanted to come true - Just you and I. Hugs, Jennifeer.
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Date: 6/15/2019 10:17:00 PM
Once again, I am in complete awe- as you have taken words from your heart and created a Masterpiece. So many moments within truly move me. The images you paint leave me breathless. "Tickling your marble stature, foaming water giggles down" Oh my!!! I smile and blush all at the same time. I shall place this in my favorites. :) Brandy
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Date: 6/15/2019 10:08:00 PM
Awesomelly penned, Panagiota
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Date: 6/15/2019 8:34:00 PM
The power of your poetic pen never lets you down, Vijay. Another beautiful offering from you and a pleasure to read. I enjoyed your note as well. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/15/2019 7:50:00 PM
I enjoyed your lovely about this enchanted which I feel is best viewed at night. It has a magical glow to it. I enjoyed your descriptive beautiful poem Vijay! : ) xxoo
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