The Wise Old Man

"save us oh save us" 
they cry to the man
"the comet is coming 
save us if you can!"
"I can I can" 
claims the wise old man
"I can I can 
but why should I?
'cause you demand?"
"you should, now hurry"
"Whats the rush,
Whats the worry?"
" the comet is coming
save us please"
"you can save yourself 
with the greatest of ease."
"but how - but how"
"just watch and see
what this comet can do for thee..."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 24, 2010 at 7:04 AM
wow, interesting, is the comet metaphorical for something? i am intrigued. :)
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