The Winter Nights

Days are shorter, nights are prolonged
Sun feels cold and in hurry to off
Moon is reluctantly doing its job
Stars are nervous and twinkling fast
Wind is dry and blowing hard 
Water is frozen in the supply
 The load shedding makes the situation worst 
Living is a real challenge in winter darks. 
06/02/2019
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March 9, 2019 at 12:57 PM
Nice start. I see simplicity and good connection in sentences of your poems . Keep writing . Stay in touch . Regards Deepti
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March 12, 2019 at 7:29 AM
Thanks a lot Deepti for your appreciation.
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February 10, 2019 at 4:55 AM
Such a magnificent poem! I can sense it at this moment. Cheer up!
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February 11, 2019 at 1:03 AM
Thank you dear
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