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The Winter Nights

Days are shorter, nights are prolonged Sun feels cold and in hurry to off Moon is reluctantly doing its job Stars are nervous and twinkling fast Wind is dry and blowing hard Water is frozen in the supply The load shedding makes the situation worst Living is a real challenge in winter darks. 06/02/2019

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Date: 3/9/2019 12:57:00 PM
Nice start. I see simplicity and good connection in sentences of your poems . Keep writing . Stay in touch . Regards Deepti
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Neeru Bhatt
Date: 3/12/2019 7:29:00 AM
Thanks a lot Deepti for your appreciation.
Date: 2/10/2019 4:55:00 AM
Such a magnificent poem! I can sense it at this moment. Cheer up!
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Neeru Bhatt
Date: 2/11/2019 1:03:00 AM
Thank you dear

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