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The Winter Has Frozen My Heart

The winter has frozen my heart. My heart is cold and hard, all my creativity has dried up. The wind, the storms have blown away my inspriation and ideas. The darkness has put a lid on the verse and rhyme. But now spring is here, and the heart begins to thaw, and creativity begin to sprout. The wind, the storms are over, now it's just a breeze that whispers of inspiration and ideas. The darkness has gone over to the light, which flashes of verse and rhyme. ..... ..... ,ad8PPPP88b, ,d88PPPP8ba, d8P" "Y8b, ,d8P" "Y8b dP' "8a8" `Yd 8( " )8 I8 8I Yb, ,dP "8a, ,a8" "Yba adP" `Y8a a8p' `88, ,88' "8b d8" "8b d8" `888' "

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Dinda Minardi

Date: 4/29/2012 9:02:00 AM

Magical writing bout weather :) Loves the heart :)

Laila Andresen Mjelde
Date: 4/30/2012 2:44:00 AM

Thank you for stopping by, apreciate it! oxox Laila

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/28/2012 2:21:00 PM

Wow....weeee! This one is smokin hot with great compliments,,,I don't think this is a true poem at all bc your creativity is still wonderful and alive...the metaphors are strong tho' and I love your poetic art...Hey, stop over to my blog to see your mom's poem, would ya please?...wink wink. Gwendolen

Laila Andresen Mjelde
Date: 4/29/2012 3:13:00 AM

Hi! Thanks for stopping by Gwendolen and for good fedbak! Yes, I will visit your blog ;0) xoxo - Laila

Brenda Victoria Northeast

Date: 4/10/2012 6:17:00 PM

Yes we do have quiet reflective times and then the seeds of thought start to form into gems- lovely, Brenda

Laila Andresen Mjelde
Date: 4/16/2012 11:10:00 AM

Thanks for stopping by. xoxo - Laila

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/8/2012 12:32:00 PM

nice to see you penning again, laila... touching piece so well done.. wow!.. your heart spins :) hggs!

Laila Andresen Mjelde
Date: 4/16/2012 11:14:00 AM

Thanks for reading my poem! xoxo - Laila

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 4/5/2012 7:50:00 AM

i don't think the winter could freeze up that creativity. and i love the heart :D enjoyed reading.

Laila Andresen Mjelde
Date: 4/8/2012 12:23:00 PM

Thank you for visit and comments my poem Jessica. - oxox Laila

Gail Debole

Date: 4/1/2012 4:29:00 PM

Hello Laila - Enjoyed reading your poem very much! I am glad that your heart is thawing and your creativity is beginning to grow again. Sometimes it is hard to keep writing when circumstances push them into hibernation. - Gail

Laila Andresen Mjelde
Date: 4/8/2012 12:23:00 PM

Thank you for visit and coments my poem Gail. - oxox love Laila