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THE WINTER HAS FROZEN MY HEART

The winter has frozen my heart. My heart is cold and hard, all my creativity has dried up. The wind, the storms have blown away my inspriation and ideas. The darkness has put a lid on the verse and rhyme. But now spring is here, and the heart begins to thaw, and creativity begin to sprout. The wind, the storms are over, now it's just a breeze that whispers of inspiration and ideas. The darkness has gone over to the light, which flashes of verse and rhyme. ..... ..... ,ad8PPPP88b, ,d88PPPP8ba, d8P" "Y8b, ,d8P" "Y8b dP' "8a8" `Yd 8( " )8 I8 8I Yb, ,dP "8a, ,a8" "Yba adP" `Y8a a8p' `88, ,88' "8b d8" "8b d8" `888' "

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Date: 4/29/2012 9:02:00 AM
Magical writing bout weather :) Loves the heart :)
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Laila Andresen Mjelde
Date: 4/30/2012 2:44:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by, apreciate it! oxox Laila
Date: 4/28/2012 2:21:00 PM
Wow....weeee! This one is smokin hot with great compliments,,,I don't think this is a true poem at all bc your creativity is still wonderful and alive...the metaphors are strong tho' and I love your poetic art...Hey, stop over to my blog to see your mom's poem, would ya please?...wink wink. Gwendolen
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Laila Andresen Mjelde
Date: 4/29/2012 3:13:00 AM
Hi! Thanks for stopping by Gwendolen and for good fedbak! Yes, I will visit your blog ;0) xoxo - Laila
Date: 4/10/2012 6:17:00 PM
Yes we do have quiet reflective times and then the seeds of thought start to form into gems- lovely, Brenda
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Laila Andresen Mjelde
Date: 4/16/2012 11:10:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by. xoxo - Laila
Date: 4/8/2012 12:32:00 PM
nice to see you penning again, laila... touching piece so well done.. wow!.. your heart spins :) hggs!
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Laila Andresen Mjelde
Date: 4/16/2012 11:14:00 AM
Thanks for reading my poem! xoxo - Laila
Date: 4/5/2012 7:50:00 AM
i don't think the winter could freeze up that creativity. and i love the heart :D enjoyed reading.
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Laila Andresen Mjelde
Date: 4/8/2012 12:23:00 PM
Thank you for visit and comments my poem Jessica. - oxox Laila
Date: 4/1/2012 4:29:00 PM
Hello Laila - Enjoyed reading your poem very much! I am glad that your heart is thawing and your creativity is beginning to grow again. Sometimes it is hard to keep writing when circumstances push them into hibernation. - Gail
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Laila Andresen Mjelde
Date: 4/8/2012 12:23:00 PM
Thank you for visit and coments my poem Gail. - oxox love Laila
Date: 3/27/2012 5:07:00 AM
Well done, welcome back Laila. Love from: IVAN,ADRIAN,MAILO,MAYA.
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Laila Andresen Mjelde
Date: 4/8/2012 12:25:00 PM
Hello my boys.....thanks for visit mom in P-Soup. - oxox love mum
Date: 3/26/2012 6:31:00 PM
Wonderful poem! I enjoyed reading every word of it.
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Laila Andresen Mjelde
Date: 4/8/2012 12:26:00 PM
Shirley, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox Laila
Date: 3/26/2012 1:40:00 PM
Nice parallel between the human condition and the spring thaw. I enjoyed this very much.
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Laila Andresen Mjelde
Date: 4/8/2012 12:26:00 PM
Ann, thank you for visit and coments my poem. - oxox Laila