Laila Andresen Mjelde Poet Free verse

The Winter Has Frozen My Heart

The winter has frozen my heart.
                                         My heart is cold and hard, 
                                       all my creativity has dried up.
                   The wind, the storms have blown away my inspriation and ideas.
                             The darkness has put a lid on the verse and rhyme.
                                              But now spring is here, 
                                         and the heart begins to thaw, 
                                         and creativity begin to sprout.
                                         The wind, the storms are over, 
                      now it's just a breeze that whispers of inspiration and ideas.
                                  The darkness has gone over to the light, 
                                        which flashes of verse and rhyme.



                                               .....                    .....
                                      ,ad8PPPP88b,         ,d88PPPP8ba,
                                    d8P"            "Y8b, ,d8P"           "Y8b
                                  dP'                      "8a8"                 `Yd
                                 8(                           "                      )8
                                  I8                                                  8I
                                    Yb,                                            ,dP
                                       "8a,                                      ,a8"
                                           "Yba                             adP"
                                               `Y8a                     a8p'
                                                   `88,               ,88'
                                                        "8b         d8"
                                                          "8b     d8"
                                                            `888'
                                                                "

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Dinda Minardi April 29, 2012 at 9:02 AM Magical writing bout weather :) Loves the heart :) Laila Andresen Mjelde April 30, 2012 at 2:44 AM Thank you for stopping by, apreciate it! oxox Laila

Gwendolen Song April 28, 2012 at 2:21 PM Wow....weeee! This one is smokin hot with great compliments,,,I don't think this is a true poem at all bc your creativity is still wonderful and alive...the metaphors are strong tho' and I love your poetic art...Hey, stop over to my blog to see your mom's poem, would ya please?...wink wink. Gwendolen Laila Andresen Mjelde April 29, 2012 at 3:13 AM Hi! Thanks for stopping by Gwendolen and for good fedbak! Yes, I will visit your blog ;0) xoxo - Laila

Brenda Victoria Northeast April 10, 2012 at 6:17 PM Yes we do have quiet reflective times and then the seeds of thought start to form into gems- lovely, Brenda Laila Andresen Mjelde April 16, 2012 at 11:10 AM Thanks for stopping by. xoxo - Laila

Nette Onclaud April 8, 2012 at 12:32 PM nice to see you penning again, laila... touching piece so well done.. wow!.. your heart spins :) hggs! Laila Andresen Mjelde April 16, 2012 at 11:14 AM Thanks for reading my poem! xoxo - Laila

Jessica Arteaga April 5, 2012 at 7:50 AM i don't think the winter could freeze up that creativity. and i love the heart :D enjoyed reading. Laila Andresen Mjelde April 8, 2012 at 12:23 PM Thank you for visit and comments my poem Jessica. - oxox Laila

Gail Debole April 1, 2012 at 4:29 PM Hello Laila - Enjoyed reading your poem very much! I am glad that your heart is thawing and your creativity is beginning to grow again. Sometimes it is hard to keep writing when circumstances push them into hibernation. - Gail Laila Andresen Mjelde April 8, 2012 at 12:23 PM Thank you for visit and coments my poem Gail. - oxox love Laila

Anne-Lise Andresen March 27, 2012 at 5:07 AM Well done, welcome back Laila. Love from: IVAN,ADRIAN,MAILO,MAYA. Laila Andresen Mjelde April 8, 2012 at 12:25 PM Hello my boys.....thanks for visit mom in P-Soup. - oxox love mum

Shirley Long March 26, 2012 at 6:31 PM Wonderful poem! I enjoyed reading every word of it. Laila Andresen Mjelde April 8, 2012 at 12:26 PM Shirley, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox Laila

Ann Roske March 26, 2012 at 1:40 PM Nice parallel between the human condition and the spring thaw. I enjoyed this very much. Laila Andresen Mjelde April 8, 2012 at 12:26 PM Ann, thank you for visit and coments my poem. - oxox Laila