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The Winds of Time

The summer breeze fills a mind full of peace, but intricate thoughts dare not ever cease. Constant throughout - without an end. Repeat it start over and begin it again. A whispering wind on a silent night, feeds us a story - the cold has a bite. The wind is a sign of the past and the present, but future to come has left us a crescent. The moon holds a key to what comes to be, like tides on a beach rush in from the sea. Pay attention to what comes and goes, like birds in the sky from eagles to crows. They all play a part in this short span of time, So watch as they soar then swoop on a dime. We all become nothing except what we leave, Behind us a past like bark on a tree. - Yours Truly

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Date: 3/4/2014 4:31:00 PM
I genuinely enjoyed the simplicity of the piece. It was very beautiful and breathtaking for me.(:
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Date: 5/17/2013 4:19:00 AM
Geeze, what can i say? thats 2 thumbs up from me ;) How long have you been writing for? Cheers, Sharon
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Date: 5/17/2013 4:27:00 AM
Thank you so much Sharon ;) and only just over a month lol I'm very new to poetry actually! I'm super pleased with your work though it inspired me to write my most recent one - "you built this wall". It took me like 5 minutes after reading your ravishing writings :) -Yours Truly
Date: 5/14/2013 10:03:00 AM
WOW!! what an explosive way to introduce your work to the SOUP. Great creative talent has been loosed on the best site on the web. I will visit often... Jake
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Date: 5/14/2013 12:51:00 PM
I'm glad I have another great poet expect much out of me. Thank you for the warm welcome and this site has become a favorite of mine :) ill be sure to read your work as well, I've seen that your are an experienced writer with a multitude of pieces to be shared. Thx again! -Yours Truly
Date: 4/28/2013 5:33:00 PM
Yours, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy the new coming week. Always & Forever! HUGS **LINDA**
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Date: 4/30/2013 5:27:00 AM
Thank you :) I feel very honored to have a poem actually featured here at the soup. And my personal favorite at that. -Yours Truly
Date: 4/24/2013 5:32:00 AM
Very nice poem. Congratulations on being featured.
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Date: 4/30/2013 5:29:00 AM
Thank you so much! I appreciate all the great feedback Matthew :D hopefully I will have have time to write some new ones soon. -Yours Truly
Date: 4/22/2013 10:13:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup - Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your thoughts and words here with us. - Thanks for the poem: number one - very well written! - Good luck! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/23/2013 11:11:00 AM
Thank you for the warm welcome Lise :) and lots of love -Yours Truly
Date: 4/22/2013 1:29:00 AM
Welcome to poetry soup. It is a large place to find your way around so if you get lost or need help just send a message. Keep on writing. You are doing great, Love, SuZ
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Date: 4/22/2013 8:22:00 AM
Thanks for your encouragement Suz, and you do the same! I enjoy having feedback to know if people actually are entertained by what I've written. It makes my day that much brighter :) - Yours Truly
Date: 4/22/2013 1:03:00 AM
I would love to hear comments for suggestions or improvements about my writing, if you would oblige with such I would be more than happy to return the favor :) -Yours Truly
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Date: 4/16/2013 4:49:00 PM
ha ha Kaleb, is the kkkkkk a test... Stopping by to wish you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community one of the best here on the net. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT
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