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The Wind's Message

The wind blows as if it has something to say Almost as if to warm me to stay away I brush it off like a speck of dust For what I'm feeling is more than lust I won't say it's love Or a message from above But what it is, is even more Ever since you had me begging on the floor Yet I hear the wind, very clearly now It went from a whisper, to practically a shout Thy wind is scary, but very honest It guides me through all the tests It leads the way, never steering me wrong Thus its message sounds like a song When you listen close you'll hear the melody I wish to open my eyes, but I'm in fright of what I may see So I follow the wind All the way to the end And when it's time for it to go The wind's soar starts to slow Now it is but a gentle breeze Making it easier to breath I open my eyes and there you are Shining bright like a new born star I take a chance and come real close For I have not a single reason to boast If not for the whispering of the wind I may have strayed, and fallen to sin But it showed me all the right paths to follow And its message left me no longer Hollow By: Cody J. Davidson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/7/2016 8:18:00 AM
Cody, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*
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Date: 4/29/2016 11:02:00 PM
awesome to see this one again, Cody. linda
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Date: 9/10/2014 4:39:00 AM
Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Cody - I choose your first very well and deep poem - You write skillfully - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/9/2014 6:20:00 PM
A wonder path, whispered by the wind, Cody, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/9/2014 6:00:00 PM
This is such a deep powerful piece! Beautiful write! A warm welcome to PoetrySoup, and happy writings! Pandita
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