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The Window Pains Questionku

Crossing the room
at breaking heart's beat
Who's banging at my pains

Blue notes and rains
crash my window panes
Is it why bluebirds cry

Copyright © Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday | Year Posted 2013

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Just That Archaic Poet Date: 10/23/2013 1:31:00 PM This is a cool form; I need to better familiarize myself with it. Enjoyed! :) Login to Reply Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Date: 10/27/2013 11:45:00 AM I'm happy you like it! This form has been invented by Richard Lamoureux; check out: he's really THE Master. Adding rhymes to it could be your own special style! And these archaic expressions too! Could really be VERY unique!

Monterey Sirak Date: 10/13/2013 7:46:00 AM Superb!!!!! Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/7/2013 8:21:00 AM You have mastered my form Hanitra! These are moth outstanding pieces. Login to Reply Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Date: 10/7/2013 2:16:00 PM Still learning, my friend; and needing your comments more than ever! Don't forget our big PoetrySoup Web Writers Webdancing Party to celebrate your success story!

Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/7/2013 8:19:00 AM You have honored me once again by your lovely spirit and presence. Thank you Hanitra. Blessing on you and your household. Login to Reply Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Date: 10/7/2013 2:07:00 PM Thanks a lot, Rick! Very much appreciated!

Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/4/2013 5:29:00 PM Hi Hanitra, all your kind visits today brightened my heart. Thanks and many hugs! Login to Reply Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Date: 10/7/2013 3:10:00 AM You're always welcome at my place, dear Bearded Poet Friend of Mine ...even if I wouldn't show up much too often! Keeping on reading your wonderful texts even when I can't comment...:) Blessings and Hugs, Hanitra

Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/3/2013 10:50:00 PM I like your questionku very much... never viewed a blue bird crying... amazing imagery...linda Login to Reply Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Date: 10/4/2013 4:07:00 PM Hello, beautiful lady! On my way to read your latest poems again! Thanks a lot for the read!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/3/2013 10:18:00 PM wow, I think you must be a quesionku expert Right away I come to your poetry and see you have many of them!! this set is good. And about your chocolate.YUM. wish I could taste it(actually I love popcorn even better than chocolate. I'm more a salty than a sweets lover, but I sure enjoyed writing about chocolate). Login to Reply Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Date: 10/4/2013 4:12:00 PM Not as good as some others, especially our friend Richard Lamoureux who invented the form! I like the intensity of this particularly concentrate form...Makes you feel and try a lot of possibilities before choosing the preferred one; Pretty tough but my passion!!! :)