The Wind of Autumn

In the night
The autumn roars-
Blowing leaves
To my front door-
Begging me
To let them in-
To save them from
The cruel wind-
That tore them from
Their mother’s’ 
Loving limbs-
As helplessly
She stands by –
For with roots
She is tied –
Naked-
Empty arms
Reaching to the sky-
Watching
As her children die-
As 
One by one
The
Leaves
Keep
Falling
D 

    O

W

     N

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 12/8/2008 1:31:00 PM
I really love this poem as I adore seasonal poetry, and this one is so visually compelling and stark (like the mother tree!). Love the form of the ending too. Really wonderful! ~Juliane
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Date: 11/13/2008 10:28:00 PM
Hi Lainie! Superb construction, flow and imagery... Well done indeed!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 10/26/2008 6:53:00 AM
Your usual excellence, Lanie, but, on the other hand, that twiggly mother seems, stoically, to accept nature, standing upright and horrifically proud! Not a criticism, just a musing. Love, daver
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Date: 10/22/2008 6:40:00 PM
Awesome!! Beautifully done and I love the unique perspective here!!
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Date: 10/19/2008 11:58:00 AM
this is beautiful!
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Date: 10/13/2008 3:07:00 AM
DOWN........wow! it's cool... I felt thru your words that imagination really has no bounds!
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Date: 10/12/2008 9:20:00 AM
there is a picture formed in my mind as I read this write, great visual, take care D-nyce
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Date: 10/7/2008 12:45:00 PM
Excellent write great feeling and imagery I love the cleverly done last line too, wonderful write its going to my favorites!!!! Laura :)
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Date: 10/7/2008 5:21:00 AM
Liked the final touch Elaine.Rgds Brian & thanks for your comments.My lates contest id for the 'fulton' form see my guideline there.
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Date: 10/6/2008 3:51:00 PM
The design of the last word ends this poem with artistic flair. Nice use of personification for a creative write. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep on writing my friend! Karen
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Date: 10/6/2008 3:39:00 PM
Lainie, you are the Queen of Personification. This is a wonder. Absolutely bringing the season to life with your magic. Awesome write! Love, Shar
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Date: 10/6/2008 9:18:00 AM
Elaine , this piece is really 1st class , with superb descriptve quality ....
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Date: 10/6/2008 8:31:00 AM
beautiful and thought provoking. a neat peace indeed.
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Date: 10/6/2008 7:13:00 AM
This was wonderful to read. Such imagination and almost makes one sad to see the leaves falling off the trees in our own yard! Good job! ~Carrie
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Date: 10/6/2008 7:01:00 AM
Hello Elaine, this was just superb. Left me stunned for a while. I can relate it to so many things. Great use of personification here. Love, Chitra
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Date: 10/6/2008 5:38:00 AM
lovely language, poignant imagery, nicely sustained metaphor ,"Naked- Empty arms" interesting use of form and clever and subtle rhymes make this poem really special. I have enjoyed reading your work, thank you..
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Date: 10/6/2008 3:29:00 AM
Elaine this is just excellent in every way - Outstanding is the only way to describe your use of this form - God Bless
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