The Wind Is Isolde - Part 2

 Continued from Part 1

The orphans and widows lean into the breeze
watching horrified hangmen descend to their knees 
for the angel of mercy’s no longer inclined
to forgive vengeful  phantoms (oh Furies of night!) ,
                                       I’ll not leave you behind.

The bandits are brazen, the highwaymen lurk,
some imbibing dark brews of a hag’s handiwork,
mostly gulping from goblets like goblins maligned.
Woman! Widen your wings, catching wisps of the wind
                                       I’ll not leave you behind.

The lepers laugh, leaping from tombstones of steel 
chasing rollaway caskets on luminous wheels;
while their shadows shake, shrouded, twixt trees intertwined,
twisted time melts at midnight, take hold of my hand,
                                       I’ll not leave you behind.

The gremlins grope, grinning face down in the dust,
while the sprites and the pixies are watching nonplussed.
They sling bolted arrows at spectres enshrined
within winds somewhat flustered, just fly from your fears 
                                       I’ll not leave you behind.

The tattered toy teddies and raggedy Anns
have escaped to the skyways in kid caravans
but now, spellbound by fancies, know not that they’ll find
their parade’s evanesced into echoes of dawn –
                                       I’ll not leave you behind.

The wind’s my enchantress, beguiles and commands
me to search for my fortune in faraway lands
and whispers her mysteries of passions entwined,
for the wind is Isolde – unfurling my sails 
                                        I’ll not leave you behind.
 
 End

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/13/2013 7:21:00 PM
well SPLENDID!!! and the heroine is a woman! Light & Love
Login to Reply
Date: 11/29/2012 1:51:00 AM
Beautiful! 'The wind is a woman', ha! No wonder she's so tempestuous. This is really amazing Terry! You've followed through very nicely. Very well done.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/6/2012 5:26:00 AM
Ah, you've followed through on the first with more outstanding imagery, Terry...this is stunning. Love the last stanza, though the others are equally as captivating. Best wishes, Mikki
Login to Reply
Date: 10/26/2012 12:53:00 AM
I think I have also found a gorgeous poet. Thank you so much. Its a great pleasure to read your poems. With warmest wishes, Larisa
Login to Reply
Date: 10/18/2012 5:51:00 PM
your writing captures the reader immediately. I have found a new favorite poet. Can't wait to read the rest of your work.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/11/2012 11:44:00 AM
Interesting Halloween work..Wouldn't want to be left behind with all those monsters..Thanks for stopping by with well wishes..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 10/10/2012 12:10:00 AM
Well! Good thing I wasn't left behind! Another fine write I must say.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/8/2012 11:30:00 AM
Nice lines....... Scrambled all to image, you are good handling those images, it brings live to art.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/7/2012 1:21:00 PM
beautiful writes here, my friend - loved parts one and two. congrats on all your wins : )
Login to Reply
Date: 10/7/2012 8:33:00 AM
hi - sent you a soup mail. kathy
Login to Reply
Date: 10/7/2012 8:01:00 AM
stunning storyline with metaphors that depict the pathos of your theme, terry.. reminds me of tristan and isolde.. fantastic!..:) huggs!
Login to Reply
Date: 10/7/2012 7:54:00 AM
After part one, part two was a no brainer had to read. Excellent
Login to Reply
Date: 10/7/2012 6:45:00 AM
Another good poem Terry, and from kathryn collins comment "Edgar Allan O'Leary" It is so true. You have been influence by Poe as much as I have been influenced by Ogden Nash.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/6/2012 9:32:00 PM
an enchanting write Terry.....hope there is a part 3 to solve the mystery of isolde....or is it already solved...thanks for sharing...love...Joseph
Login to Reply
O'Leary Avatar
Terry O'Leary
Date: 10/6/2012 9:38:00 PM
Joseph, there is no part 3... however, you might have a look at "Isolde - If Only You'd Be Mine".... (maybe that's part 0...)
Date: 10/6/2012 6:43:00 PM
Swashbucklers beware.... Love the last verse..... would like to jump on your ship... (just a note: your verbs are not always in agreement...might strengthen your writing to pay attention to this detail.) Victoria
Login to Reply
Date: 10/6/2012 5:26:00 PM
wowser..a grande slam..I love getting on a tear like this only trouble is you can't get it all on one page! Have you heard of St. Catherines Wheel? very interesting look it up! ;) Light & Love
Login to Reply
Date: 10/6/2012 8:27:00 AM
Harry Horsman said it best "one could live within this poem" It's truly a whirlwind of images each swirled away by the next in gusts. "In vampire steeples, cathedral clocks tick Like the droplets of wax neath a pale candle’s wick." Within the night’s terrors its flame is enshrined But the glim is fast fading – So scatter your cares I’ll not leave you behind. Edgar Allan O'Leary's Masque of the Red Death. love Kathy
Login to Reply
Date: 10/6/2012 2:11:00 AM
wonderful Saga, gives one so many aspects of thought, will read this again and then more, one could live within this poem,,,,
Login to Reply
Date: 10/5/2012 6:36:00 PM
Great story. Enjoyed every verse.
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter