The Wind Has Teeth

The wind has teeth today
   nipping at my cheeks and ears
The chill air is a blade, ripping away
   the lining of my jacket

The wan sun's rays fall helplessly to the ground
   lacking any true conviction
Gray clouds swirl aimlessly overhead
   mirroring the tenor of the day  

Yet first snow's flakes linger in the air
   somewhere in a snow-globe dimension
Two lovers move their lips in prayer
   as five point stars melt on the kiss they share
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 1:17 PM
I was in that wind last week; it has such a bite! Great job!
Buehler Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 5:31 PM
What a nice way to warm up when the wind has teeth! Great poem, Gershon.
Wolf Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 6:42 PM
Thank you so much, Evelyn. Appreciate your support! :) gw
Gauthier Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 4:42 PM
Very sweet, Gershon.
Wolf Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 4:57 PM
Thank you so much, Line. Season's Joy, Gershon
Thompson Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 3:55 PM
Excellent Gershon, truly delightful my friend...Ron :)
Wolf Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 4:56 PM
Ron, thanks for the boost. Season's greetings, Gershon
Adams Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 3:39 PM
perhaps that kiss is all that was needed to escape the biting winds...as long as lips aren't being bitten...well not too hard anyone...a little nibble never hurt anyone... enjoyed this one my friend, the ending was the perfect amount of warmth :) hugs
Wolf Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 4:56 PM
Aw, thanks! Here's to more warmth! :) gw
Foster Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 3:26 PM
So lovely, romantic and peaceful... sweet. A triumph... Ann
Wolf Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 3:38 PM
Gosh, I am overwhelmed by the word 'triumph!' Thank you so, so much, Ann. Here's to a wonderful new year. :) Gershon
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