The Wind Denied the Sun

  The wind denied the sun
     a gift, to caress soft cheeks... 

  Unwelcome gusts stiffened up their gaits, 
     through fearsome clouds sun no more peeked
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Fowler Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 1:55 PM
Waiting for it here in ET. We've had a couple of faux starts. I love the caressing of soft cheeks and gusts stiffening their gaits...great imagery gw. laf :)
Goldsmith Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 11:12 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. The last few days, the weather has changed many times. Come on spring.... Have a wonderful day..................
Wolf Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 5:08 PM
Agreed. Come on, Spring! We're ready... Thank you, Paula.
Kalita Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 7:51 AM
The uniqueness of the composition is it's out of the box imagination and visualisation
Wolf Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 5:11 PM
Hey, thanks for telling me what you liked about this one, Silpika. ~ Unboxed
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