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The Wind Denied the Sun

The wind denied the sun a gift, to caress soft cheeks... Unwelcome gusts stiffened up their gaits, through fearsome clouds sun no more peeked

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/21/2024 1:55:00 PM

Waiting for it here in ET. We've had a couple of faux starts. I love the caressing of soft cheeks and gusts stiffening their gaits...great imagery gw. laf :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/17/2024 11:12:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. The last few days, the weather has changed many times. Come on spring.... Have a wonderful day..................

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/17/2024 5:08:00 PM

Agreed. Come on, Spring! We're ready... Thank you, Paula.

Silpika Kalita

Date: 3/17/2024 7:51:00 AM

The uniqueness of the composition is it's out of the box imagination and visualisation

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/17/2024 5:11:00 PM

Hey, thanks for telling me what you liked about this one, Silpika. ~ Unboxed

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/17/2024 5:51:00 AM

your words describe the weather here over the past few days....leaving me to wonder...will the spring sun ever return. Great imagery, sir. have a pleasant day, Sara

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/17/2024 5:07:00 PM

In real estate, it's location, location, location. In poetry, it's imagery, imagery, imagery. So, thank you for the encouragement, Sara. Cheers, Gershon