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The Wind Blows

. . . and the wind blows pushing the blue bird higher farther past raindrops and darkened clouds into a valley of golden sun where rainbows dance in her dulcet eyes where worries wander away and new days are hatched . . . and the wind whips clearing out the old preparing for the new mixing the earthen mulch from a fallen past into an unmade bed of fertile ground A morning mist fills the meadow dew drips off the first spring daisy beauty overcomes me I hold her ever gently in my arms watching . . . as the wind blows

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Date: 2/18/2016 10:53:00 PM
This felt very light and airy to me (and I'm not saying that because of the wind verses). You took me on a journey through nature and the joy of morning. "I hold her gently in my warms" ... I was curious on whether this refers to a person or wrapping up nature in your arms. In either case, it matters little, because it's beautiful nonetheless.
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Date: 2/6/2016 8:44:00 AM
Congrats on POTD
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Date: 1/28/2016 7:04:00 AM
A beautiful write, Tim. Congratulations on a well deserved POTD. T.J
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Date: 1/28/2016 4:43:00 AM
Such a nice poem it's touches all hearts great tim congratulations for POTD ... With love
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Date: 1/28/2016 4:24:00 AM
- CONGRATULATIONS ..... P.O.T.D., TIM !!!
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Date: 1/28/2016 3:12:00 AM
Refreshing to the soul.
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Date: 1/27/2016 11:29:00 PM
beautiful imagery and the structure of the write kind of sweeps you away into that picturesque valley, almost as if you were taking the journey with the bird, and then the ending strikes a bit of emotion knowing that the bird is possibly that someone you and i hold dear that makes all this magic true
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Date: 1/27/2016 11:23:00 PM
Thanks everyone for the congratulations and thanks TPS for the honour.
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Date: 1/27/2016 4:26:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/27/2016 12:58:00 PM
Tim if you're not very careful I fear you are going to be deemed as one of the greatest poets who ever lived!
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Date: 1/27/2016 11:04:00 AM
Great write! Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. Enjoy the honor- Alexis
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Date: 1/27/2016 10:47:00 AM
Excellent write, Tim, congratulations on poem of the day!
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Date: 1/27/2016 8:54:00 AM
wow i loved it <3 you ARE an awesome poet :)
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Date: 1/27/2016 8:36:00 AM
Congrats.Well deserved potd! I wish I could favour it twice .: )
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Date: 1/26/2016 2:42:00 PM
- Sounds like a beautiful place, Tim :) - Beautifully written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/26/2016 3:20:00 AM
Oh this is so creative and filled with such a blissful beauty Tim. To my fave.
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Date: 1/26/2016 8:06:00 AM
Thanks Charma. My muse has been visiting me lately in my dreams. Telling me all about her love. I think I'll be writing a few more.
Date: 1/26/2016 3:01:00 AM
When we hold the one we love, beauty we embrac, dear Tim! Marvelous!
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Date: 1/26/2016 8:07:00 AM
That we do my dear friend. I'll be over to visit you later. Thanks
Date: 1/25/2016 11:53:00 PM
a soothing feel to this read Tim, enjoyed:) LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/25/2016 11:25:00 PM
tremendous build-up of mellow images ending with a sweet punch, tim.. huggs
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Date: 1/25/2016 5:43:00 PM
Very beautiful Tim so pleased to see Mr Romance is back on form:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/25/2016 4:16:00 PM
Sure would be nice to find a place such as this! Great write Tim.
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Date: 1/25/2016 4:20:00 PM
Isn't that your back yard?....thanks Arthur