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the wind blew that day the hearse shiny black the coffin so small for a baby boy- weeping filled the air a lullaby slipped from my lips in the wild wind- drifting with tears with heads bowed hearts broken he left us - on small angel- wings ___________________________ December 10, 2019 Poetry/Diminished Hexaverse/the wind beneath angel wings Copyright Protected, ID 19-1206-643-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Pick A Title, Vol 12, Diminished Hexaverse sponsor, Edward Ibeh, Title Chosen #2- The Wind Beneath Angel Wings First Place

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Date: 1/12/2020 1:28:00 PM
wow, this is so impressive, Dear Heart. Love this, and congrats on a top spot!
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Date: 1/15/2020 2:47:00 AM
Andrea, thanks for the compliment and for the congrats, appreciate !
Date: 1/11/2020 3:51:00 PM
Poignant, Constance. Congrats on a most deserving gold medal win.
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Date: 1/15/2020 2:48:00 AM
Line thanks so much for the congrats and the compliment !
Date: 1/11/2020 2:51:00 PM
oh my sweet Dear Heart, my love to you. Congrats on this heart-wrenching deserving of a top win poem. x:-)-luloo
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Date: 1/15/2020 2:48:00 AM
Lu, thanks so much for the compassion and the congrats !
Date: 1/11/2020 8:34:00 AM
Congrats Constance.
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Date: 1/15/2020 2:49:00 AM
Rob, thanks for the congrats !
Date: 1/11/2020 7:26:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win with this powerful write, Constance!:-)
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Dear Heart
Date: 1/15/2020 2:50:00 AM
Edward, thanks so much for another inspiring contest and for my wonderful win !
Date: 1/11/2020 6:19:00 AM
Congrats! God bless you.
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Dear Heart
Date: 1/15/2020 2:50:00 AM
Beata, thanks for the congrats !
Date: 12/10/2019 3:17:00 PM
wow Constance your words fit perfectly in this. Cant say I`ve been to a childs funeral. Very somber. Thanks for sharing this. Best of luck in the contest
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Dear Heart
Date: 1/15/2020 2:51:00 AM
NA, thanks for the compliment on my poem !
Date: 12/10/2019 1:45:00 PM
Nothing worse in this world we live in, excellent Sis!!
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Dear Heart
Date: 1/15/2020 2:52:00 AM
Bobby, thanks for the visit and the compassion !
Date: 12/10/2019 9:10:00 AM
centering this accentuates the cyclone of perpetual pain associated with a child's death.
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Dear Heart
Date: 12/10/2019 9:17:00 AM
John, thanks for visiting and commenting, I agree this had to be centered !